Can't afford toothpaste
A Cinquain24 total reviews
Comment from hollyinvesuvianite
Kamran, my friend, this is so clever and cute! And isn't it the truth- excellent work, my friend. I loved the image you chose as well. God bless, my friend. Holly
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012
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Kamran, my friend, this is so clever and cute! And isn't it the truth- excellent work, my friend. I loved the image you chose as well. God bless, my friend. Holly
Comment Written 12-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012
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I am very happy you like it my friend, appreciate the wonderful review, thank you very much.
Comment from pickelhead
Not as funny as it sounds as many people suffer this malady that for some has no cure and must never get too close that they might offend.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012
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Not as funny as it sounds as many people suffer this malady that for some has no cure and must never get too close that they might offend.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012
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Hello pickelhead; appreciate your visit and thank you for the insightful review, have a gread day.
Comment from steevie
Humorous little poem. Its so true about the cost of everything now-a-days. Food costs are unbelievable. One can put forty dollars worth of groceries in two plastic bags, and the bags are not full by any means
well done, Kamran
steve
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012
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Humorous little poem. Its so true about the cost of everything now-a-days. Food costs are unbelievable. One can put forty dollars worth of groceries in two plastic bags, and the bags are not full by any means
well done, Kamran
steve
Comment Written 12-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012
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Hello Steve, my friend I appreciate your visit and am glad you like the poem, thank you very much.
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you're so welcome
steve
Comment from PoesyPoet
Well dear, we'll just have to remember to floss after each hundred dollar bill. Maybe we can get change. (lol) I just couldn't resist that one. This was too neat. Thanks for sharing. PP
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012
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Well dear, we'll just have to remember to floss after each hundred dollar bill. Maybe we can get change. (lol) I just couldn't resist that one. This was too neat. Thanks for sharing. PP
Comment Written 12-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012
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Hello PP, I love your great sense of humor my friend, very well said, apprciate your time and the wonderful review, thank you very much.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
This was a powerful work Ameen. Inflation at its best, seems everything we buy has shot up in price.
There is much we have to swallow that can leave a bad taste behind. I think your work had a great depth to it.
I liked your picture. It really was a perfect match for your poem. The little fish getting gobbled by the big fish.
Very well done.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012
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This was a powerful work Ameen. Inflation at its best, seems everything we buy has shot up in price.
There is much we have to swallow that can leave a bad taste behind. I think your work had a great depth to it.
I liked your picture. It really was a perfect match for your poem. The little fish getting gobbled by the big fish.
Very well done.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 12-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012
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Hello Maureen, my friend I am happy to read your wonderful, thoughtful comments, appreciate your visit and the stars, God bless you.
Comment from juliaSjames
Oh, you nailed this one, Kamran. I think this is a wonderful cinquain where syllable count fades into the background and all the reader notices is the rueful, satirical commentary.
This is how I love to see you write, my friend. You have the talent and the sagacity to take an untenable situation and show us the humor in it that allows us to chuckle and move forward.
Great image to accompany your well-scribed words.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012
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Oh, you nailed this one, Kamran. I think this is a wonderful cinquain where syllable count fades into the background and all the reader notices is the rueful, satirical commentary.
This is how I love to see you write, my friend. You have the talent and the sagacity to take an untenable situation and show us the humor in it that allows us to chuckle and move forward.
Great image to accompany your well-scribed words.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012
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Hello again my wise friend, I am so happy today, thanks to you and the wonderful, encouraging review, enjoy the Sunday.
Comment from TammyGail
Lmao.. God if that isn't the truth ameen your such a trip :) only you could write this with and humor. Its true damn it tooth paste 6 and 7 dollars, really wtf is that its flipping toothpaste..
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012
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Lmao.. God if that isn't the truth ameen your such a trip :) only you could write this with and humor. Its true damn it tooth paste 6 and 7 dollars, really wtf is that its flipping toothpaste..
Comment Written 12-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012
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Hello Tammy, my friend I am delighted you like the write, appreciate your time and the wonderful review, thank you very much.
Comment from Gungalo
LOL leave it to you, Ameen. This is beyond funny. LOL. I'll be sending you some toothpaste. Watch for it. Crazy and sane, I say.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012
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LOL leave it to you, Ameen. This is beyond funny. LOL. I'll be sending you some toothpaste. Watch for it. Crazy and sane, I say.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012
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Hey Gunga, glad you like the write my friend, and please send me enough toothpaste as people say I have a big mouth, take care and enjoy, God bless.
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You got it Ameen!!
Comment from melyuki
oh yeah... you have done it again my friend. such a clever play on words you have here for us Kamran... your mind always amazes me with these little beauties you come up with ... subtle , intellegent and extremely well meaning... love it... and the picture tops it off.. thanks for spreading a taste of this bad breath... happy smiles always , cheers from mel xxxxxxx
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012
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oh yeah... you have done it again my friend. such a clever play on words you have here for us Kamran... your mind always amazes me with these little beauties you come up with ... subtle , intellegent and extremely well meaning... love it... and the picture tops it off.. thanks for spreading a taste of this bad breath... happy smiles always , cheers from mel xxxxxxx
Comment Written 12-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012
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Mel my beautiful friend, you made me smile, you always make me smile, thank you for the wonderful review, God bless.
Comment from rjuselius
money stinks, isn't that what people say.
"Living
Within my means
I do put my money
Where my mouth is but still I have
Bad breath"
it's witty, funny and sarcastic. well done, i really enjoyed reading it!
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012
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money stinks, isn't that what people say.
"Living
Within my means
I do put my money
Where my mouth is but still I have
Bad breath"
it's witty, funny and sarcastic. well done, i really enjoyed reading it!
Comment Written 12-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012
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Hello again my friend, very kind of you to stop by and I am very happy you like the poem, thank you very much for the wonderful and generous review.
