After She Swallowed the Pills
Desperate woman resorts to a desperate plan.3 total reviews
Comment from yndemand
This is deep and so sad that it is reality with alot of people. The depressed state of their mind doesn't let them think of anything esle at the time. Very moving this poem
easily read and well written.
Too late she realized he would not come
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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This is deep and so sad that it is reality with alot of people. The depressed state of their mind doesn't let them think of anything esle at the time. Very moving this poem
easily read and well written.
Too late she realized he would not come
Comment Written 09-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Thank you, yndemand, for reading and reviewing my poem. Your comments are appreciated.
Comment from Bobbi22
You did a great job at describing a desperate moment, a true loss. Attempting suicide with the hope of rescue is such a dangerous thing. Excellent poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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You did a great job at describing a desperate moment, a true loss. Attempting suicide with the hope of rescue is such a dangerous thing. Excellent poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Thanks, RightPics. Your review and comments were appreciated.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, mystery writer, you did a great job writing this heartfelt poem about the woman who realized too late her love wasn't going to be there to save her. good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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this is very well written, mystery writer, you did a great job writing this heartfelt poem about the woman who realized too late her love wasn't going to be there to save her. good luck in the contest
Comment Written 09-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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A belated thank-you, sweetwoodjax, for your review and comments. Hope your father-in-law is ok now???
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he died january 27th
