Comment from pharp

Excellent

Nicely done, very few words; written so eloquently delivering a beautiful and endearing message. Nice selection of artwork to accommodate your poem.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2012

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Comment from C.C. Jones

Excellent

I like it. Is the petal her zone? Still as in you are lying still or you still love her zone. I don't quite get it. So it's the guessing that keeps my interest but the meanings seems to be under my nose

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2012

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Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Well done on percervering with this form until you nailed it this reads well and it is presented neatly well done again regards Fuller

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2012

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Comment from hoop81

Excellent

Great poem. I know that a lot of people judge poetry in different ways for different reasons but for me its all about the poems resonance. If it resonates with me, makes me feel something deep down or forces me to look around me and see new aspects of the world in which I live then it has succeeded and is poetry to the core. This is one of those poems.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2012

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Comment from Bryana

Excellent

I certainly enjoyed reading your poem
and see a perfect word count. I can see
a love story in those three lines.

I wish you good luck in the contest
and a very happy Sunday.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2012

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Comment from Rdfrdmom2

Excellent

You know, TOPE1:

The whole thing with syllable count sometimes is more a
matter of dialect where you live than what the dictionary
says, I'm thinking. I've had to scrabble to fix some
poems sometimes because I got called on syllable count
and was absolutely stunned to find out my whole area was
wrong because I checked with lots of folks, including
English teachers, who had all agreed with me I was right --
go figure!

thanks for this lively and lovely love poem
good luck in the contest
love,
jan

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2012

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Comment from mazi jee

Excellent

Nice poem.
Clear and obvious.
Simple words.
According to form and scheme.
Nicely described idea.
Really worth appreciating.
Well done.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2012

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Thanks a lot. I appreciate your review which are written lines.

Comment from Anisa-

Excellent

Looks like the syllable count is correct. Interesting content for a very small write. Best of luck in the contest.

Anisa

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2012

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Comment from gabriowl

Excellent

Intimate and warm ~ an expression of savory sense ~ a boldly written, vividly painted scene ~ one that has been examined to the very finest detail, and yet remains unpredictable and lively.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2012

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Comment from Vandaroo123

Good

The last line doesn't match in with the whole thing. You should add more descriptive words. The middle line has more than 7 syllables it has 8! You should replace it with That often feeds on my flesh.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2012

Please can you explain how the second line is 8 syllables.

reply by Vandaroo123 on 15-Apr-2012

fre-qu-ent-ly thats what i think :)

reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012

No you miss it. It 3 syllabes, please find out.

reply by Vandaroo123 on 15-Apr-2012

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