Comment from The Stranger

Excellent

things most definitely seem to conspire against Anna, it may begin to force Troy into believing his future happiness lies elsewhere, away from all the turmoil

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2012

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Anisa-

Excellent

This is very well written and enjoyable. I think your descriptions are great and the story is easy to follow. It kept my interest through the read.

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2012

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from writerwish

Excellent

Anna is still in danger and now that Paul is caught with memories, this romance may not be the sealed deal I thought it was. Peaking and keeping my interest. No mistakes seen.

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2012

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Rama Rao

Excellent

An excellent post which kept moving the story forward. If it's Monday it's Barbara's post. I start the week reading your post. It's written in impeccable and your inimitable style.

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2012

Thank you for the kind review and the support.

Comment from Rdfrdmom2

Excellent

barbara:

Another excellent chapter. How true it is that one's
demons will resurface while trying to assist others
deal with theirs. I think it is Satan's way of trying
to keep us isolated and not willing to help others but
he forgets we serve a Higher Power.

thanks for sharing
love,
jan

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2012

Thank you for the kind review and insight.

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

How sad that after all that has happened , this can't just be over for all of them. It is hard to heal with the ongoing fear and harassment. I like how you tied this into the beginning of the book!!! Debbie

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2012

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Belinda

Excellent

Hi, Barbara. I forget where the baby is during this scene. Guess I have to check the previous chapter. This (part) chapter reveals interesting things about Troy's past that I may have missed too ...:) Hope to read the continuation soon. Troy and his adoptive parents are truly admirable people!

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2012

The baby is with Betty, but really doesn't have a roll in this. Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Herb

Excellent

Back at the top hey Barb, good for you.

Another well written chapter and i couldn't see nothing to improve on. Not something I personally would read, but many would.

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2012

Thank you for your kind review.

Comment from bonnick

Excellent

I enjoyed this piece, I read the beginning of this story a few days ago, and enjoyed it immensely, so i already knew the storyline but even if I hadn't read the beginning, I think I would have still found it easy to follow.
I thought it was short and stopped suddenly but after reading your notes I now know why :-)

Thank you for sharing ;-)

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2012

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Karen Payton Holt

Excellent

Hi Barbara, as always, the smooth dialogue and compelling setting absorbed me...and it ended too soon.
Poor Anna, still no respite. And it was deftly done, your reminder that Troy, too, has scars that are yet to heal.
Great job.

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2012

Thank you for the kind review.