Mo the Orangutan
a red ape in my car15 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello mermaids
Here you had me believing you really had a cute red ape in your car
Oh yes your poem indeed was fun to read.
smiles
Gert
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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Hello mermaids
Here you had me believing you really had a cute red ape in your car
Oh yes your poem indeed was fun to read.
smiles
Gert
Comment Written 24-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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I am honored by your generous amount of stars. Thanks so much and glad you enjoyed reading about this orangutan. Elaine
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You are so welcome
Gert
Comment from judiverse
What a clever mascot! Sounds even better than a dog because you don't have to walk it. Your mascot is free of the worries that you have such as taxes and is free to enjoy the comfort of being out of the winter snow and enjoying the music. Your word choice is great throughout and you give a great description of your mascot. Last two lines are excellent about little orangutan bringing comfort in a world gone mad. judi
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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What a clever mascot! Sounds even better than a dog because you don't have to walk it. Your mascot is free of the worries that you have such as taxes and is free to enjoy the comfort of being out of the winter snow and enjoying the music. Your word choice is great throughout and you give a great description of your mascot. Last two lines are excellent about little orangutan bringing comfort in a world gone mad. judi
Comment Written 24-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Peter@Poole
This free verse is full of imagery that the reader can see. I can't help thinking you were short of something to write about. The background colour is appropriate. Peter
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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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This free verse is full of imagery that the reader can see. I can't help thinking you were short of something to write about. The background colour is appropriate. Peter
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Comment Written 24-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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This is a poem in the realm of fantasy and it is a matter of taste I think. Those who enjoy this type of fantasy can relate while others cannot. This orangutan is more of a natural subject for me,fantasy and nature combined. Elaine
Comment from gazzagodbod
had to be a big six for this monkey buisness love orangutans and could just imagine one sat beside you lol thanks my friend gazzagodbodxx
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2012
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had to be a big six for this monkey buisness love orangutans and could just imagine one sat beside you lol thanks my friend gazzagodbodxx
Comment Written 23-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2012
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I am honored and you made my day. I have had a stressful day at my job and sometimes my toy apes and monkeys help me get through life. Thanks for a great review and taking time to read. Elaine
Comment from Gungalo
Imagination is a wonderful thing and if yours involved a miniature red ape, then so be it. It's kinda fun to hear what you think she thinks.
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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2012
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Imagination is a wonderful thing and if yours involved a miniature red ape, then so be it. It's kinda fun to hear what you think she thinks.
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Comment Written 23-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2012
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I appreciate you taking time to read about my wild imagination. Thank you so much. Elaine
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Smiles.
