The Poet`s Life
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Comment from mermaids
It is hard work, write and rewrite and then criticism can be severe. We are crushed when we think we have a masterpiece and the reviews do see the poem in the same light. Your poem continues the poet's journey of struggle.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2013
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It is hard work, write and rewrite and then criticism can be severe. We are crushed when we think we have a masterpiece and the reviews do see the poem in the same light. Your poem continues the poet's journey of struggle.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2013
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Thats exactly what this little journey in my book is all about ...
Comment from G.B. Smith
Hello again Sir Bic
I truly enjoyed the premise of this engaging poem. Being an old fart, It would have helped it the font was larger. That aside, it was superb
Bear
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Hello again Sir Bic
I truly enjoyed the premise of this engaging poem. Being an old fart, It would have helped it the font was larger. That aside, it was superb
Bear
Comment Written 03-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Sorry Bear, much appreciated...
Comment from rchitwood
Been there when you rewrite and correct only to be disappointed. Your poem describes the poet's life well and has good images of how hard a poet tries. Very smooth flow and your photo compliments your poem well> Blessings Rita
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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Been there when you rewrite and correct only to be disappointed. Your poem describes the poet's life well and has good images of how hard a poet tries. Very smooth flow and your photo compliments your poem well> Blessings Rita
Comment Written 03-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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Thanks Rita...
Comment from Chris Davis
A very beautiful chronicle of the journey that a writer/poet makes as they write, seek recognition, are hopeful and then have that hope dashed. A poem that will easily be personally subjective to many on F/S.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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A very beautiful chronicle of the journey that a writer/poet makes as they write, seek recognition, are hopeful and then have that hope dashed. A poem that will easily be personally subjective to many on F/S.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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Thanks Chris...
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Comment from Aveindha
Excellent job of using beautifully expressed poetry to convey this poor poets heart ache at having his best work turned into nothing by critics. I don;t think this should happen, everyone see's art differently...excellent job very well done
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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Excellent job of using beautifully expressed poetry to convey this poor poets heart ache at having his best work turned into nothing by critics. I don;t think this should happen, everyone see's art differently...excellent job very well done
Comment Written 03-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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Many thanks A.
Comment from Linda England Bonam
This was a very good story in a poem, that was a fun experience to read. It is true in so many ways! Great job, and good luck with your future writing!
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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This was a very good story in a poem, that was a fun experience to read. It is true in so many ways! Great job, and good luck with your future writing!
Comment Written 03-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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Many thanks Linda
Comment from dhee khaye
I like the idea of your art here. I agree to compliment the growing flowers to your title, it works. Your color background is just too dark to present a "life" maybe just replace it to something lighter. (just a suggestion)
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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I like the idea of your art here. I agree to compliment the growing flowers to your title, it works. Your color background is just too dark to present a "life" maybe just replace it to something lighter. (just a suggestion)
Comment Written 03-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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It is in fashion with the rest of the chapters and if it is read from chapter one to the end I think youll find it rather compliments the narrative...just my suggestion.
Comment from Tengeresz
Hi
Poems are like children. They are precious to their parents regardless of their faults. Criticism is difficult to take and a defensive reflex is far to often finds a well meaning critic.
Tengeresz
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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Hi
Poems are like children. They are precious to their parents regardless of their faults. Criticism is difficult to take and a defensive reflex is far to often finds a well meaning critic.
Tengeresz
Comment Written 03-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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I think what I was trying to convey is of a simillar vain...the poet`s work is his or hers and so long as they enjoy and appreciate it it will always have a home , for them anyway....
