One faith step at a time
How to navigate difficult times16 total reviews
Comment from mauial
This is good, but I don't think it got to the point of what this was about until quickly enough. It didn't seem personal enough to me.
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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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This is good, but I don't think it got to the point of what this was about until quickly enough. It didn't seem personal enough to me.
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Comment Written 03-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Thank you for your opinion.
Comment from Glenny00
I enjoyed the poem, it moved me to remember that life is not always easy, but there is a God out there who will help in times of need. We must depend on Him, where is our faith, the poem refreshes us in the belief of Our God. Reminding us to bring thanks. The rhyming of the poem every first and second line rhymed however the last two lines did not. Good luck !
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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I enjoyed the poem, it moved me to remember that life is not always easy, but there is a God out there who will help in times of need. We must depend on Him, where is our faith, the poem refreshes us in the belief of Our God. Reminding us to bring thanks. The rhyming of the poem every first and second line rhymed however the last two lines did not. Good luck !
Comment Written 03-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Thank you for your comments.
Comment from Deorre Leonard
I love this faith poem.It has a really good flow the structure is great. The presentation is good the picture adds to the presentation of this poem. Well done.Deorre
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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I love this faith poem.It has a really good flow the structure is great. The presentation is good the picture adds to the presentation of this poem. Well done.Deorre
Comment Written 03-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Thank you for your kind comments
Comment from cthomsen
This is a poem I would love for my daughter to read as she ventures out into life. This is a message we need to hear over and over again. Well Done.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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This is a poem I would love for my daughter to read as she ventures out into life. This is a message we need to hear over and over again. Well Done.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Thank you for your kind thoughts. Our God is amazing.
Comment from Bobbi22
This is a very good spiritual poem. There is a very nice rhyme scheme along with a very good message. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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This is a very good spiritual poem. There is a very nice rhyme scheme along with a very good message. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 03-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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Thank you
Comment from Chris Davis
Very heartfelt poem about the power pray can have to help seek guidance in one's life.
Was a little surprised when the rhyming scheme was lost in the last two lines.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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Very heartfelt poem about the power pray can have to help seek guidance in one's life.
Was a little surprised when the rhyming scheme was lost in the last two lines.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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Yes agree the rhyme was very week. I think being a contest and have posted it I can't change it. I'll have another look at it.
