One faith step at a time
How to navigate difficult times16 total reviews
Comment from rashi kumar
How very beautiful!
God always holds our hand through rough terrains, if we believe in him with all our heart.
Very beautiful rhyming!
Pleasure to read and review!
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2012
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How very beautiful!
God always holds our hand through rough terrains, if we believe in him with all our heart.
Very beautiful rhyming!
Pleasure to read and review!
Comment Written 07-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2012
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Thank you.
Comment from rchitwood
Your poem is so true and God rescues me all the time my Faith in Him stays daily. Very good description of The Way The Truth and The Life. Very good structure and smooth line flow. Your photo compliments your poem well. Blessings Rita
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2012
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Your poem is so true and God rescues me all the time my Faith in Him stays daily. Very good description of The Way The Truth and The Life. Very good structure and smooth line flow. Your photo compliments your poem well. Blessings Rita
Comment Written 07-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2012
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Thank you for reading and enjoying the poem and for such a lovely review. Our God is good.
Comment from artemis53
Leading us to higher plains gives us a choice. Will we follow? Some may not though the path is made clear. I choose to follow.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2012
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Leading us to higher plains gives us a choice. Will we follow? Some may not though the path is made clear. I choose to follow.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2012
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Me too. I hope.
Comment from rightforyou
This is a wonderful poem that reads very well and sounds great when read out loud..Very powerful and a pleasure to read,...Cheers...xx.Ron
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2012
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This is a wonderful poem that reads very well and sounds great when read out loud..Very powerful and a pleasure to read,...Cheers...xx.Ron
Comment Written 06-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2012
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God is good. Thank you.
Comment from smudge
The correct quotation is "the way, the truth and the light." The light of the world. "Time and shine" do not rhyme. "in line," rhymes with shine. Rescues does not rhyme with plain. "And with love our hearts infuse." The lack of
Punctuation is too numerous to address.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2012
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The correct quotation is "the way, the truth and the light." The light of the world. "Time and shine" do not rhyme. "in line," rhymes with shine. Rescues does not rhyme with plain. "And with love our hearts infuse." The lack of
Punctuation is too numerous to address.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2012
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Thank you for stopping to read my poem and to make suggestions
Comment from MizKat
This is a beautiful poem to fit the wonderful prompt about Asking God for direction. It is very interesting and poetically it speaks the truth. Kat
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2012
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This is a beautiful poem to fit the wonderful prompt about Asking God for direction. It is very interesting and poetically it speaks the truth. Kat
Comment Written 04-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2012
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Thank you. God is good.
Comment from Hollyhock
A true poem of faith. The first three stanzas move along easily and you use the image of making our way through life, linking it with well known words, "The Way, the Truth, the Life." I wish you had perhaps tried to find some more original lines quite a few of them are reminiscent of old hymns
"Then His light will surely shine" and
"Give thanks to our God and King" for example.
There is no doubt about the depth of your feeling just try reworking some of the lines. Good Luck.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2012
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A true poem of faith. The first three stanzas move along easily and you use the image of making our way through life, linking it with well known words, "The Way, the Truth, the Life." I wish you had perhaps tried to find some more original lines quite a few of them are reminiscent of old hymns
"Then His light will surely shine" and
"Give thanks to our God and King" for example.
There is no doubt about the depth of your feeling just try reworking some of the lines. Good Luck.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2012
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Thank you for your observations. I will think that one through.
Comment from mmayen
I really like the second stanza. It's true. The poem to me seems more like an appreciation to God for his direction. It's nice. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2012
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I really like the second stanza. It's true. The poem to me seems more like an appreciation to God for his direction. It's nice. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2012
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Thank you. He is good and this is the way I have learned to pray.
Comment from peggles
this is beautiful poem
nice rhyme and tone
very pretty and beautifully presented
a treat to read something so beautiful
well done
I enjoyed the poem
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2012
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this is beautiful poem
nice rhyme and tone
very pretty and beautifully presented
a treat to read something so beautiful
well done
I enjoyed the poem
Comment Written 04-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2012
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Thank you.
Comment from bkbehera
One can have the feeling of God's existence everywhere in the life. At the time of need, sincerely pray the God and involve in a good work, certainly , success will be at you feet. Selection of simple wards and wonderful composition has given life in the poem.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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One can have the feeling of God's existence everywhere in the life. At the time of need, sincerely pray the God and involve in a good work, certainly , success will be at you feet. Selection of simple wards and wonderful composition has given life in the poem.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Thank you for reading and reviewing.
