The Poet`s Life
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Dedication"Metre ... Mixed
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Comment from mermaids
This little poem is almost a song. I can hear music when I read it. On a heart's whim is my favorite line, it is a true line about the poet.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2013
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This little poem is almost a song. I can hear music when I read it. On a heart's whim is my favorite line, it is a true line about the poet.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2013
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This was his attempt and though humourous ... still true to the concept.
Comment from poetbear
Nice and creative. Very different.
Easy to read and nice flow.
Great image,imagery,and metaphor.
A different type of Valentine.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2012
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Nice and creative. Very different.
Easy to read and nice flow.
Great image,imagery,and metaphor.
A different type of Valentine.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2012
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Certainly is Bear...
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Bic, I never knew how to express that "her or him" thing but many of the pieces I do could be either male or female. I particularly like the way you ended this with such an option. Nice work on this one. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2012
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Hi Bic, I never knew how to express that "her or him" thing but many of the pieces I do could be either male or female. I particularly like the way you ended this with such an option. Nice work on this one. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 02-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2012
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excellent kiwi...Initially it was a man expressing his undying love for his beloved woman...then he had a thought what if I like men...? Hence, the itallics...he was only thinking aloud, thankfully he sticks with his woman.
Comment from TammyGail
Bicpen - how true is this poem indeed
It really is, very honest
well expressed in few words
loved your use of imagery
thanks for sharing and
good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012
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Bicpen - how true is this poem indeed
It really is, very honest
well expressed in few words
loved your use of imagery
thanks for sharing and
good luck in the contest
Comment Written 01-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012
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Excellent T...just testing the waters never really made an ABC before, did not know what to expect.
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:) you did great
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Excellent cheers T.
Comment from Anisa-
Well done. I love the last line and the picture that you chose to go with it. The picture brings out different feelings about the writing. Interesting mix. Great job, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012
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Well done. I love the last line and the picture that you chose to go with it. The picture brings out different feelings about the writing. Interesting mix. Great job, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012
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Ecellent many thanks...
Comment from Doc Holiday
Nicely written ABC contest entry.
Picture is just a tad different, are you going for a "Garden of Eden" type theme? Or is this a dialogue of the snake? Pretty clever!
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012
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Nicely written ABC contest entry.
Picture is just a tad different, are you going for a "Garden of Eden" type theme? Or is this a dialogue of the snake? Pretty clever!
Comment Written 01-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012
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Not quite sure Doc...it kinda brings a thought provoking to the words I still like it though...
Comment from purrfect tale
Lingering desire, that paints a strong picture. I never thought of desire like this before but your poem makes me see it in a different light. It's always there like a ghost haunting our every move.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012
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Lingering desire, that paints a strong picture. I never thought of desire like this before but your poem makes me see it in a different light. It's always there like a ghost haunting our every move.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012
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Just the way it should be glad it had an effect.
Comment from uniqueauthor
I enjoyed the read. One can never live without it.
Love cannot be described in adjectives,
because it is an adjective,
It is a verb
And it is also a noun.
I' ve heard of people name Love.
In what other word
can one
fit a dictionary
and a thesaurus,
And a grammar text?
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012
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I enjoyed the read. One can never live without it.
Love cannot be described in adjectives,
because it is an adjective,
It is a verb
And it is also a noun.
I' ve heard of people name Love.
In what other word
can one
fit a dictionary
and a thesaurus,
And a grammar text?
Comment Written 01-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012
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Quality...
Love
lives on...
Many thanks.
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You're welcome.
Comment from keimosobie
so when you linger you are motionless and quite. waiting to strike your pray or your love obsession. kind of like the black Cobra in you picture. I think i get it. Nicely writen even if i missed the matk.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012
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so when you linger you are motionless and quite. waiting to strike your pray or your love obsession. kind of like the black Cobra in you picture. I think i get it. Nicely writen even if i missed the matk.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012
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I think I get it also....thought the picture was unique thanks for the concept opened my mind to another idea of the picture ppoem...
Comment from rchitwood
Very good and your last line made the poem it was creative. Your poem has strong emotions and images of hope and desire.
Your photo compliments your poem. Blessings Rita
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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012
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Very good and your last line made the poem it was creative. Your poem has strong emotions and images of hope and desire.
Your photo compliments your poem. Blessings Rita
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Comment Written 01-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012
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Thanks Rita...I like that line.
