The Poet`s Life
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Comment from poetbear
Talk about knowing well what you say and do.
Reads well and make sense.
Definitely belongs here as we can all relate.
Geat use of imagery and metaphor.
I like the image.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2014
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Talk about knowing well what you say and do.
Reads well and make sense.
Definitely belongs here as we can all relate.
Geat use of imagery and metaphor.
I like the image.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2014
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Great poetbear glad you really appreciate and can empathises with the poet's tale ... after all thats what this one is .
Comment from minopavlic
yes, a poet's life is full of joy and sorrow, for they often reflect on past experiences and uniquely bring them back to a life of thier own.
Mino
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2013
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yes, a poet's life is full of joy and sorrow, for they often reflect on past experiences and uniquely bring them back to a life of thier own.
Mino
Comment Written 08-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2013
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Many thanks ... !
Comment from dmt1967
This is a good poem it tells the story of a poet very well it could be telling my story although I don't class myself as a poet just someone that writes poetry thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2013
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This is a good poem it tells the story of a poet very well it could be telling my story although I don't class myself as a poet just someone that writes poetry thank you for sharing
Comment Written 06-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2013
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Excellent ... there is more to the story if you care to read the following chapters of the book ... !!!
Comment from PoeticXscape
This is great. It has wonderful expression and emotion described clearly in the piece. Thank you for sharing and keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2013
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This is great. It has wonderful expression and emotion described clearly in the piece. Thank you for sharing and keep up the good work.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2013
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Excellent ... there is more to the story if you feel up to it, just check out the chapters next to it ... happy reading!
Comment from 4tulips
I enjoyed your poem about a poet's journey to putting pen on paper to write a creative poem. There is a lot to consider when writing anything. But in the end, if it satisfies himself and other readers then it was all worth the time and effort they put into it.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2013
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I enjoyed your poem about a poet's journey to putting pen on paper to write a creative poem. There is a lot to consider when writing anything. But in the end, if it satisfies himself and other readers then it was all worth the time and effort they put into it.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2013
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Then perhaps you would like to discover what his jorney was by reading the rest of the chapters in the book ... and I'll tell you what if you dont feel like reviewing them dont but PLEASE at least humour me by telling me in PM or otherwise that you actually have read the story like its suppose to be ... PM stands for Private Message ...
... I would be very much encouraged and obliged, I'm sure.
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What is it that you are saying?
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Well the poem of the Poet's Life is a complete book of seperate chapters ... all suppose to be read as one continuous story, hence the other chapters in the book ... thats all !!!
Comment from Walu Feral
Excellent work and oh so true. I have spent many years trying to get it right, sometimes they fall into place and sometimes they don't. Good work.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2013
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Excellent work and oh so true. I have spent many years trying to get it right, sometimes they fall into place and sometimes they don't. Good work.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2013
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Maybe you could check out the poem in its entire form to the conclusion ... that is what this book is about, maybe you will find some encouragement
Comment from Jane Johnson
Nice informative piece. Myself, I try to keep it as simple as possible and just enjoy the rhyme and rhythm of each I write.To me, it's like dancing. If you can't feel the rhythm, it's not worth getting out of your chair. I liked this though and will have to check on a couple of these things just to see what they mean. I think if everything becomes a JOB, it takes the fun out of it. Thanks for sharing. I loved the artwork and background color you used to compliment your verse. It really is all pretty much black or white to me.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2013
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Nice informative piece. Myself, I try to keep it as simple as possible and just enjoy the rhyme and rhythm of each I write.To me, it's like dancing. If you can't feel the rhythm, it's not worth getting out of your chair. I liked this though and will have to check on a couple of these things just to see what they mean. I think if everything becomes a JOB, it takes the fun out of it. Thanks for sharing. I loved the artwork and background color you used to compliment your verse. It really is all pretty much black or white to me.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2013
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Maybe you could check out the poem in its entire form to the conclusion ... that is what this book is about, maybe you will find some encouragement
Comment from Kevin C
You have written a poem that many of us really can identify with. I love your thoughts and your words are so easy to read. Your poem flows so well and is a pleasure to read. Enjoy this look into the poets mind very much.
Kevin
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2013
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You have written a poem that many of us really can identify with. I love your thoughts and your words are so easy to read. Your poem flows so well and is a pleasure to read. Enjoy this look into the poets mind very much.
Kevin
Comment Written 05-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2013
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Maybe you could check out the poem in its entire form to the conclusion ... that is what this book is about, maybe you will find some encouragement
Comment from Erys
Between what would a poet and his work done for his truly vision is a difference, is always a difference, which humbles him...
nice view!
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2013
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Between what would a poet and his work done for his truly vision is a difference, is always a difference, which humbles him...
nice view!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2013
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Maybe you could check out the poem in its entire form to the conclusion ... that is what this book is about, maybe you will find some encouragement
Comment from mermaids
I can relate to your words. Often I have an idea but getting it onto paper is a struggles. The tools of poetry such as meter and syllables always is a challenge.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2013
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I can relate to your words. Often I have an idea but getting it onto paper is a struggles. The tools of poetry such as meter and syllables always is a challenge.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2013
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Just out of curiosity ... can I ask why you did not review the rest of the book.
