The Poet`s Life
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Incantation..."Metre ... Mixed
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Comment from mermaids
Every thought shallow or deep is a true line. Poets have both, deep emotional stuff or fanatasy, which I mostly write about. I like the free verse form and structure of your words.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2013
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Every thought shallow or deep is a true line. Poets have both, deep emotional stuff or fanatasy, which I mostly write about. I like the free verse form and structure of your words.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2013
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Glad you can appreciate the idea and concept unfolding ...
Comment from Bobbi22
I find that your paper and pen is rich givings. You have shared what a lot of poets feel and you expressed it in such an enlightening way. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2012
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I find that your paper and pen is rich givings. You have shared what a lot of poets feel and you expressed it in such an enlightening way. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2012
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Many thanks, thats what we`re supposed to be about...
Comment from G.B. Smith
hey there Pal
This looks like a giant canary took a crap on your page
Do not let that other you he is proficient at it. You are a fine author/poet
Bear
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2012
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hey there Pal
This looks like a giant canary took a crap on your page
Do not let that other you he is proficient at it. You are a fine author/poet
Bear
Comment Written 31-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2012
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Thanks Bear much appreciated...just experimenting with my free verse.
Comment from c_lucas
The eyes have it. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2012
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The eyes have it. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2012
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Charlie your making me laugh again...I did not know I had entered a competion...lol...never mind another day looms.
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I thught you had entered the contest about writing an ode to a particular body part. My error.
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No worries Charlie...your always welcome.
Comment from aml224
Thanks for this poem. The picture and the poem really set up a striking atmosphere. The words really sound beautiful, and the imagery is quite beautiful too. Notwithstanding the five-star, however, given for all of the above, I find the poem confusing. Perhaps you could make the wording more connected?
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2012
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Thanks for this poem. The picture and the poem really set up a striking atmosphere. The words really sound beautiful, and the imagery is quite beautiful too. Notwithstanding the five-star, however, given for all of the above, I find the poem confusing. Perhaps you could make the wording more connected?
Comment Written 28-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2012
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"am" if I may call you that,
...let me try something...
To be straight to the point is the reason for no flowery arrangement of unecessary words. The author is standing at his papers demise and willing it to live...he has had a sad piece of news, his paper is blank...roused with passion and heartfelt emotion he stirs to give a last speech before he gives up forever.
Now how do I expect to put that emotion in a short breif encounter of free verse with the most impact for the reader linguistically and visually.
I thought it was quite connected...a clue perhaps...his paper is the orphans grave.
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...maybe it`s an incantation...
Comment from manjuneelam
I like the style of the poem. It is well composed with good choice of words and has a nice flow to it. Pleasure to read and review. Well done.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2012
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I like the style of the poem. It is well composed with good choice of words and has a nice flow to it. Pleasure to read and review. Well done.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2012
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Excellent thanks M.
Comment from Linda England Bonam
Nice one, and creative and original! I enjoyed the read and the presentation. Nice colors and artwork to compliment your good writing!
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2012
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Nice one, and creative and original! I enjoyed the read and the presentation. Nice colors and artwork to compliment your good writing!
Comment Written 28-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2012
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Did it hypnotise like its meant to Linda...I been looking at it for ten minutes and already I think I`m a cactus.
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LOL....
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any more poetry trips like this and I will probably forget where I live...
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You are funny! I always appreciate humor!
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Anytime...
Comment from Kingsland
I liked the way you ended this poem. Because in the end all the really matters is... You and I. This was an excellently written piece of poetic art. I enjoyed reading it... John
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2012
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I liked the way you ended this poem. Because in the end all the really matters is... You and I. This was an excellently written piece of poetic art. I enjoyed reading it... John
Comment Written 28-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2012
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Excellent, much thanks Kingsland, much appreciated.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Words are powerful whether they come easily or haltingly--whether they are sung, etched, or written. Your use of simile and personification are effective.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2012
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Words are powerful whether they come easily or haltingly--whether they are sung, etched, or written. Your use of simile and personification are effective.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2012
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Many thanks Janice...
Comment from Glasstruth
Love this poem! Each time you read it you get something else out of it. Your metaphors are jumping from to deck to deck as each ship of thoughts pass each other by. Wonderful writing! Les
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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2012
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Love this poem! Each time you read it you get something else out of it. Your metaphors are jumping from to deck to deck as each ship of thoughts pass each other by. Wonderful writing! Les
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Comment Written 28-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2012
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Thanks les, glad yoou enjoyed and keep enjoying...I hope.
