Love
Love with no return13 total reviews
Comment from Just Pete
I always a romantic poem especially in such a short poetic form. It speaks of unconditional love, the real kind. You have a great way with words. I don't know, but I think you are young and imaginative. This is a beautiful piece of writing.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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I always a romantic poem especially in such a short poetic form. It speaks of unconditional love, the real kind. You have a great way with words. I don't know, but I think you are young and imaginative. This is a beautiful piece of writing.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Hello,
How are you.
Thank you for the review.
Well, your guess is correct, I am just 23 this year. :-)
I am learning and will learn more..
Glad if I can be your friend... :)
Comment from Dawn Munro
This is a very sweet 5-7-5, and your notes are especially wise. Your syllables count is spot-on, and the sentiment expressed one that should resonate with everyone.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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This is a very sweet 5-7-5, and your notes are especially wise. Your syllables count is spot-on, and the sentiment expressed one that should resonate with everyone.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Hello,
Thank you very much...:)
Comment from Vijay Kumar V
Honey evening! Ms.Happy-go-lucky girl:)
Took a personal interest 'cause your name fascinated me and then 'Thanks!to the heaven' your writing shimmering you,The real you ofcourse flaunted me.
Loved reading your profile and the poem was just awesome.Loved the selection of words a lot!
Nice work!
Could i plz know if you an Indian?!!!
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2013
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Honey evening! Ms.Happy-go-lucky girl:)
Took a personal interest 'cause your name fascinated me and then 'Thanks!to the heaven' your writing shimmering you,The real you ofcourse flaunted me.
Loved reading your profile and the poem was just awesome.Loved the selection of words a lot!
Nice work!
Could i plz know if you an Indian?!!!
Comment Written 04-May-2013
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2013
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Hello,
Sorry that I took such a long time to reply you. Was quite busy with my studies. Hehe... Yeah, I am an Indian girl..
Have a nice day ahead! :D
Comment from brown.amy97
Good Poem!! I love short poetry!!! Even though it is a small poem, the words are very powerful!!! I really enjoyed reading your great writing. GOD BLESS!!
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2012
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Good Poem!! I love short poetry!!! Even though it is a small poem, the words are very powerful!!! I really enjoyed reading your great writing. GOD BLESS!!
Comment Written 25-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2012
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hello...how are you? I feel good when I read your review about my poem...Actually, I am just the beginner and I am learning a lot from you guys...We can share anything that you would like to know...Oh, how I forgot...I am from Malaysia and my name is Shalini...Nice to meet you there...have a nice day...;-)
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Hello Shalini. This is brown.amy97, but my real name is Ashley. Thank you so much for your reply. I have not gotten on fanstory in a while. I am so glad I came on it today.
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Hi Ashley. Nice to meet you...:)
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Hi Shalini. Nice to meet you too!
Comment from ernesto escarro
Love
It's a feeling more than the returns expected.
What prize comes is life going through many returns happening
because of joy that no can encompass to control.
reply by the author on 07-May-2012
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Love
It's a feeling more than the returns expected.
What prize comes is life going through many returns happening
because of joy that no can encompass to control.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 07-May-2012
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Hye...Yes...true...exactly! I agreed with you too
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Thanks for sharing.
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You are always welcome there...:)
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Thank you. God bless.
Comment from robina1978
I think this is one of the most beautiful little poems about love. And then only in these 3 lines. Dot on syllable count. But mainly such an important message.
reply by the author on 07-May-2012
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I think this is one of the most beautiful little poems about love. And then only in these 3 lines. Dot on syllable count. But mainly such an important message.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 07-May-2012
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hye...thank you very much for your sweet review! :D
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Very welcome, Ine
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Nice to meet u Ine...:)
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Same here, Ine
Comment from peggles
There are so many different forms of love that can be shared by so many people. Poets could go on forever describing each one differently
I liked this verse very much and thought it well composed
You chose a perfect photo to compliment your work
reply by the author on 07-May-2012
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There are so many different forms of love that can be shared by so many people. Poets could go on forever describing each one differently
I liked this verse very much and thought it well composed
You chose a perfect photo to compliment your work
Comment Written 16-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 07-May-2012
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Hye there...thank you very much for the sweet review....have a nice day ahead :)
Comment from bkbehera
A nicely written 5-7-5 expressing the eternality of love, irrespective of time and, age. No body knows when love blooms for other and continue. Love is unconditional and evergreen. It is impressive. Just you can have a look on my recent work: "When we meet" and "No for yes". You may enjoy.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2012
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A nicely written 5-7-5 expressing the eternality of love, irrespective of time and, age. No body knows when love blooms for other and continue. Love is unconditional and evergreen. It is impressive. Just you can have a look on my recent work: "When we meet" and "No for yes". You may enjoy.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2012
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Thank you very much for the review. Yes, definitely I will have a look on your work. I will give a review on that too... Have a nice day..:)
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, shalini, this is a beautiful
5 7 5 poem about love that knows no boundaries, great imagery, i enjoyed reading it and wish you the best of luck in the contest. welcome to the website.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2012
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this is very well written, shalini, this is a beautiful
5 7 5 poem about love that knows no boundaries, great imagery, i enjoyed reading it and wish you the best of luck in the contest. welcome to the website.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2012
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wow...thank you very much for the review...I really feel appreciated and motivated too to write many poems in future. Bless me. :)
Comment from Gungalo
A very good write Honey. Far from the maddening crowd, so to speak. It was perfect for the style and form. It is special indeed.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2012
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A very good write Honey. Far from the maddening crowd, so to speak. It was perfect for the style and form. It is special indeed.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2012
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Hye Gungalo. Thank you very much for the review. Im still new here and Im trying to improve my English by writing poems and stories. Nice to meet you there :)
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Nice to meet you too Honey. I think you are doing just fine.
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yeah...hope so...:) have a nice day ahead...
