Amongst The Shadows Of My Heart
a triolet44 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Alvin,
So nice to see you composing your petrey again.
As usual your poetry is wht I call perfect ex. of a
Triolet Poetry .
Tahnk you for sharing
Gert
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2012
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Hello Alvin,
So nice to see you composing your petrey again.
As usual your poetry is wht I call perfect ex. of a
Triolet Poetry .
Tahnk you for sharing
Gert
Comment Written 25-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2012
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Thanks, Gert. I had to take some time off teaching so I could write! Thanks for a great review.
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You are welcome
Alvin
Comment from MyYiaYia
The poetry is very, very nice. I really liked the repeating line 'You dwell in time that does not end'. It was my favorite, as I could make it pertain to several areas of my life. I especially liked the picture. It looked like something I would do in henna for someone. Beautiful. Deb :0)
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2012
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The poetry is very, very nice. I really liked the repeating line 'You dwell in time that does not end'. It was my favorite, as I could make it pertain to several areas of my life. I especially liked the picture. It looked like something I would do in henna for someone. Beautiful. Deb :0)
Comment Written 25-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2012
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Thanks for an excellent review. I am quite appreciative.
Comment from uniqueauthor
An as long as she is in your heart,
she is with you.
Grief, like guilt, is such a dibilitating emotion, and so hard to dispel. But A Rabbi told me once that it's not the greiving that honors the dear one who has been parted from you life,
It's the love you hold with your heart.
Hang in there. It will get better.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2012
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An as long as she is in your heart,
she is with you.
Grief, like guilt, is such a dibilitating emotion, and so hard to dispel. But A Rabbi told me once that it's not the greiving that honors the dear one who has been parted from you life,
It's the love you hold with your heart.
Hang in there. It will get better.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2012
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Thanks for an excellent review; this is a ficitonal poem and it doesn't reflect my current situation, so no worries. Thanks again.
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Okay. You're welcome, and my thanks to you.
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And you're welcome! I have liked your reviews of my work. I read your profile. Are you considering my Genesis and Poetrycourse, by any chance? Go to Classes on the menu on the above toolbar, click on that course from the drop down menu, and when that screen appear, click on Course Details. There you will have a chance to peruse the syllabus and buy the course. I'd love to have you in a class!
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I will. thank you again.
Comment from babylonia
al,
it seems like ages since i last saw you writing. this is a great example of a triolet. i like the rhyming line. imagery is excellent. great picture choice.
good luck~
love,
barbara
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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2012
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al,
it seems like ages since i last saw you writing. this is a great example of a triolet. i like the rhyming line. imagery is excellent. great picture choice.
good luck~
love,
barbara
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2012
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Yes, I have been busy teaching. Finally taking some time off. Thanks for a great review...still looking for an agent.
