Lonely Roads
My brother passed away of cancer May 01, 20116 total reviews
Comment from goatcabin
i am touched by your gentle tribute to your brother,especially since it mirrors my own sadness almost exactly. It is difficult to express the pain of such a loss, but you have succeeded very well. Thank you.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2012
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i am touched by your gentle tribute to your brother,especially since it mirrors my own sadness almost exactly. It is difficult to express the pain of such a loss, but you have succeeded very well. Thank you.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2012
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Thank you for your kind review of my poem. I am sorry for your loss.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Loss. What a terrible reality to face alone especially when it comes to a bond between brothers. This definitely has a melancholy feel to it. Good luck in your contest. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2012
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Loss. What a terrible reality to face alone especially when it comes to a bond between brothers. This definitely has a melancholy feel to it. Good luck in your contest. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 26-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2012
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Thank you Kiwi for your reading my poem and your kind remarks.
Comment from reconciled
Touching poem,written expertly.I have read all the entries and in my humble opinion you won.Very moving, and speaks to the love you have for your brother.Great job.God bless you-Michael.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2012
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Touching poem,written expertly.I have read all the entries and in my humble opinion you won.Very moving, and speaks to the love you have for your brother.Great job.God bless you-Michael.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2012
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Thank you Michael for reading and reviewing my poem. I value your opinion.
Comment from adewpearl
Heartfelt expression of grief at a deep, personal loss
You are so right that when we weep we weep for ourselves, those of us left behind who miss the laughs, the phone calls, the hugs, the shared music... Brooke
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2012
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Heartfelt expression of grief at a deep, personal loss
You are so right that when we weep we weep for ourselves, those of us left behind who miss the laughs, the phone calls, the hugs, the shared music... Brooke
Comment Written 25-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2012
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Thank you Brooke for your kind review of my poem for my brother. I appreciate your input.
Comment from appuhere
its very beautifully written.... i feel for your brother... i can understand the loneliness he leaves behind in your heart... Today wherever he is i guess he will feel honored for the lovely poem you have written to him...
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2012
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its very beautifully written.... i feel for your brother... i can understand the loneliness he leaves behind in your heart... Today wherever he is i guess he will feel honored for the lovely poem you have written to him...
Comment Written 25-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2012
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Thank you for your kind review of my poem . Yes, I do believe I will see my brother again someday but today I miss him. I am glad you liked my poem.
Comment from donette1914
this was so sad of losing a brother. i dont know if you believe the bible but it does say you will see him again on earth. once again my heart truly goes out to you
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2012
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this was so sad of losing a brother. i dont know if you believe the bible but it does say you will see him again on earth. once again my heart truly goes out to you
Comment Written 25-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2012
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Thank you so much for the six star rating. I am glad you liked my poem. Yes, I do believe in the Bible and know that I will see my brother again. I just get to missing him some days.
