Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 49 "Part three, Chapter 15"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from alexisleech
Another great part chapter. Just as I thought Anna's victimisation was coming to an end, off we go again. It makes you wonder what might be happening to Troy, in his so-called sortie to the office. I look forward to the next chapter, when I will hopefully find out. Alexis x
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2012
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Another great part chapter. Just as I thought Anna's victimisation was coming to an end, off we go again. It makes you wonder what might be happening to Troy, in his so-called sortie to the office. I look forward to the next chapter, when I will hopefully find out. Alexis x
Comment Written 25-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from robyn corum
I saw no nits in this piece. It was well=-written and I'm glad to see that Anna is ready to strike out on her own. Thanks. I enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2012
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I saw no nits in this piece. It was well=-written and I'm glad to see that Anna is ready to strike out on her own. Thanks. I enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Hareem.S
Hmmm I think it's a good idea for them to tak it slow. Very mature of troy and he is kind for waiting. A very well penned down story I hope Anna heals soon.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2012
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Hmmm I think it's a good idea for them to tak it slow. Very mature of troy and he is kind for waiting. A very well penned down story I hope Anna heals soon.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Carolyn Hilliard
It sounds like Anna has decided to have a revolution, a change in heart as well as mind. I just caught up and have enjoyed your story. You have a good sense of how people will react; it makes your stories believable.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2012
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It sounds like Anna has decided to have a revolution, a change in heart as well as mind. I just caught up and have enjoyed your story. You have a good sense of how people will react; it makes your stories believable.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and the support.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
This is a wonderful chapter! I really enjoyed this two parts of your very well written piece:
"You're Bobby's wife. Did you think you'd get away with whoring around?" asked a female voice. "You'll pay."
Anna slammed down the receiver, then picked it up and screamed, "We're divorced. I can do what I want." She slammed it down again. That was stupid, they'd already hung up. At the sound of a loud muffler, she ran to the window, but couldn't see it."
GREAT JOB Barbara!!
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2012
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This is a wonderful chapter! I really enjoyed this two parts of your very well written piece:
"You're Bobby's wife. Did you think you'd get away with whoring around?" asked a female voice. "You'll pay."
Anna slammed down the receiver, then picked it up and screamed, "We're divorced. I can do what I want." She slammed it down again. That was stupid, they'd already hung up. At the sound of a loud muffler, she ran to the window, but couldn't see it."
GREAT JOB Barbara!!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from LisaMartino
Good job with Troy and his chivalry. I liked that Anna seemed a bit lost when she was home alone without Michael. It's as if she doesn't know how to be a person without someone to care for.
The intrigue of the female voice is a good choice to end this section.
Good job!
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2012
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Good job with Troy and his chivalry. I liked that Anna seemed a bit lost when she was home alone without Michael. It's as if she doesn't know how to be a person without someone to care for.
The intrigue of the female voice is a good choice to end this section.
Good job!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2012
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Nanashirley
Good for her I am so glad that she is starting to grow stronger. The warmth and understanding you create give a feeling of reality. I saw no need for editing.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2012
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Good for her I am so glad that she is starting to grow stronger. The warmth and understanding you create give a feeling of reality. I saw no need for editing.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2012
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Mike Momba
i liked the opening of the chapter. i found it captivating. it kept me going to the end. the flow is good. i liked this:
This is great -"Until that day, I'll be patient.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2012
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i liked the opening of the chapter. i found it captivating. it kept me going to the end. the flow is good. i liked this:
This is great -"Until that day, I'll be patient.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2012
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Piggies Grandma
This is a very enjoyable chapter Barbara. It is cleverly written and very well thought out. It looks like Anna is going to start sticking up for herself. I don't think they'll leave her alone that easy though.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2012
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This is a very enjoyable chapter Barbara. It is cleverly written and very well thought out. It looks like Anna is going to start sticking up for herself. I don't think they'll leave her alone that easy though.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2012
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from rightforyou
Barb.
I loved this and the way it was written. I great job on story drama along with content...I Think she's been whoring around and she is starting to like it ...LOL
Looking forward to reading more...Ron
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2012
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Barb.
I loved this and the way it was written. I great job on story drama along with content...I Think she's been whoring around and she is starting to like it ...LOL
Looking forward to reading more...Ron
Comment Written 24-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2012
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Thank you for your kind review.
