Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

OH, so cute!!!! I think this should be posted on BillBoards!!! You did a good job ow writing this fun but important poem.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2012

Billboards-is that a website? Thanks so much. Glad you enjoyed it!!! Debbie

Comment from artemis53

Excellent

Very well done. I received a laugh from it also. I've gone through some somber readings this morning. I just got off of work and really needed a giggle.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2012

I'm glad I could lighten your day!!! Thanks for reviewing!!! Debbie

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

I like the alliteration in each of your lines
Your poem is in excellent abcderian form, and I like the collection of wise advice you have compiled, some quite serious and inspirational and others humorous, in good mix :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2012

Thanks so much, Brooke. I was just goofing around with words and was quite surprised when it became something!!! Debbie

Comment from rightforyou

Excellent

Great

Nice job on this poem. I love the style along with the words used to make this one shine.This would make a perfect tool for teaching young children their ABC'S...Nice job, love it,...Ron

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2012

Good idea. Thanks so much. glad you enjoyed it!!! Debbie

Comment from amarherig14

Exceptional

Well written abecedarian poem. Wouldn,t it be great if all those things could wiped out from our existence. What a wonderful world it would be!The picture is a plus for your write. Good luck.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2012

Thank you again. I am glad you enjoyed it!!! Debbie

reply by amarherig14 on 23-Jan-2012

You are welcome,Debbie. Blessings,Margie.

Comment from Chris Tee

Excellent

Wow! Debbie old sport, you have indeed composed an absolutely marvelous abecadrian poem here for us ma'am.
Well done with this splendid work we have here girl.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2012

Thanks so much. Glad you enjoyed it!!! Debbie

Comment from Realist101

Excellent

Hi Debbie! I like most of your philosophy here, each letter has a great idea to go with it! I could not think of hardly anything to go with all of them! lol! Good work! And art too! :)) xoxo, Susan

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 Comment Written 22-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2012

Thanks Susan, hope you are still feeling better!!! Love you! Debbie

Comment from Melspoems

Excellent

Wow, very good and well thought out.
I love writing abecdarian poems.
Yours is great, wouldn't it be a great would if we could do all those things!!!

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 Comment Written 22-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2012

Thanks so much. take care!!! Debbie