Time Is Not Infinite
It is reality behind the gateway for us all2 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
Your poem is in good 5/7/5 form but almost impossible to read with black font on dark blue background - I read it by using the highlighting function, but many readers don't know how to do that.
I like the imagery of the pouring sands and the message you deliver. Brooke
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2012
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Your poem is in good 5/7/5 form but almost impossible to read with black font on dark blue background - I read it by using the highlighting function, but many readers don't know how to do that.
I like the imagery of the pouring sands and the message you deliver. Brooke
Comment Written 21-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2012
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Thanks, I chanced the background color, It was my first time posting, so a bit confused about the whole thing :) hopefully it is fixed now :D
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changed*
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It looks perfect now - welcome to the site :-) Brooke
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Thank you! There are a lot of talented writers here. Glad I found it.
Comment from mumsyone
The sands are pouring.
Soon, the last grain will fall through.
Unbound, passage home.
This is a good 5-7-5 poem, but it is very difficult to read with the dark blue background. I had to highlight it to read it.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2012
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The sands are pouring.
Soon, the last grain will fall through.
Unbound, passage home.
This is a good 5-7-5 poem, but it is very difficult to read with the dark blue background. I had to highlight it to read it.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2012
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Thank you, I did manage to figure out how to fix this. I am going to double check to make sure it did. :) ty again for the rating :)
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Much better!
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Thanks!
