Birds of same Feathers
A Senryu15 total reviews
Comment from uniqueauthor
Politics is just another form of religion
And we all know what that does
You scatch my back
And I'll
white-wash
yours.
Live in sin
And lie within
I'll vote for you
You know what to do.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2012
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Politics is just another form of religion
And we all know what that does
You scatch my back
And I'll
white-wash
yours.
Live in sin
And lie within
I'll vote for you
You know what to do.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2012
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Hello uniqueauthor, my friend I appreciate your time and the thoughtful insights, thank you very much.
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You're welome as always
Comment from adewpearl
Washington, D.C. - add comma
excellent alliteration in pit full of politicians, and I just love that visual and imagery
pit is the perfect word choice
fantastic satiric commentary in your satori line, anda perfect choice of complementary illustration :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2012
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Washington, D.C. - add comma
excellent alliteration in pit full of politicians, and I just love that visual and imagery
pit is the perfect word choice
fantastic satiric commentary in your satori line, anda perfect choice of complementary illustration :-) Brooke
Comment Written 19-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2012
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Brooke, I thank you my friend, appreciate the grammar correction, please take care.
Comment from Gungalo
You call them as you see them, Ameen. One politician is pretty much the same as the next to me. They may cry louder of softer, but their all a bunch of babies to me.
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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
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You call them as you see them, Ameen. One politician is pretty much the same as the next to me. They may cry louder of softer, but their all a bunch of babies to me.
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Comment Written 19-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
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Bunch of babies indeed, yet they fool us so eaily every election; thank you my friend.
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They don't fool me, Ameen.
Comment from KinaSalad
Hi there Kamran, I like your senryu here and nice picture. Yes, they are in a pit and full of crooked ideas. They will get what's coming to them one day soon, I tell you. Thanks for sharing
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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
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Hi there Kamran, I like your senryu here and nice picture. Yes, they are in a pit and full of crooked ideas. They will get what's coming to them one day soon, I tell you. Thanks for sharing
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Comment Written 19-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
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I sure hope so my friend, I thank you for the visit and the wonderful review, please take care.
Comment from Spitfire
Marvelous senryu, my friend. Follows all the rules. Great satori at the end. Smart use of alliteration in line two.
"Genre" -what a perfect word for a writing site! Love the picture.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
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Marvelous senryu, my friend. Follows all the rules. Great satori at the end. Smart use of alliteration in line two.
"Genre" -what a perfect word for a writing site! Love the picture.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
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Hello again my friend, I thank you for the time and the kind review, you have a big heart, please take care.
