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The Crook in the White House

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Comment from Mastery
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Hi, barb. How have you been? Long time since you posted isn't it? I love your poem. You are just as talented as ever. Blessings.. Bob

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2012
    Hi Bob. Good to see you and hope all is well in your world. It feels good to be back writing again and see old friends. I'm doind well. Blessings and thank you. Barbara
reply by Mastery on 21-Jan-2012
    Good to have you back. Am I still on your fan list? I just posted chapter 32 of my book. I cannot remember now...weren't you folowing that? Take care Barb...Blessings...Bob
Comment from Permelia
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It is good to be reading your poetry again. It is a travestry knowing women are raped in some of these crountries and blamed for being raped.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2012
    So good to see you Mona. Blessings dear lady. Barbara
Comment from Misrael
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WOW! That is powerful and I can see how it could make some men very mad! But I think that you said what had to be said and I admire you for it. Great job.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
    Thank you for your kind words and rating.. Blessings, Barbara
Comment from ernesto escarro
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Muslim Mentality

If manhood is in doubt it is because of
something wrong given priority
of thought
coincidentally happening in distress
during drought period where everyone needs to
tighten their belt for existence.

Like beheading, women are hiding their faces
to leave no visible scars
for a child beyond care and reparation.
This is the Muslim tradition.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
    Thank you. Blessings
reply by ernesto escarro on 19-Jan-2012
    You are welcome. God bless.
Comment from Chris Tee
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This is an absolutely sensitive issue and I will only rate you on the poetry standards here old sport.
Well done it is an excellently written poem.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
    Yes it is. Thank you for the rating. Blessings, Barbara