Beautiful Life
Life3 total reviews
Comment from j0ka
Cool poem, I think it could use better structure and there are a few spelling errors, if you did those purposely then I apologize. Anyhow I did like the message and feel behind it. It was rather enjoyable =)
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
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Cool poem, I think it could use better structure and there are a few spelling errors, if you did those purposely then I apologize. Anyhow I did like the message and feel behind it. It was rather enjoyable =)
Comment Written 19-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
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Thank you :) well those are typo errors will change it
Comment from Jade Johnson
I wonder if you have understood the rules and the requirements for this contest
The first line is 5 syllables
E.g.:
everything ready.
to be mixed all together
to make a nice pie
You can edit your piece and make the requirements and place this somewhere else later.
Blessings Jade
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
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I wonder if you have understood the rules and the requirements for this contest
The first line is 5 syllables
E.g.:
everything ready.
to be mixed all together
to make a nice pie
You can edit your piece and make the requirements and place this somewhere else later.
Blessings Jade
Comment Written 19-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
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Thank you !
Comment from magicpotwhat
Feelings of a hard past, But learned through experiences , to open to the light, "now found" all right,The rhyme of words flow well ENJOYED THIS THANKS
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
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Feelings of a hard past, But learned through experiences , to open to the light, "now found" all right,The rhyme of words flow well ENJOYED THIS THANKS
Comment Written 19-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
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Thank you !!
