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Comment from adewpearl
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A very strong opening paragraph - I love the concept of financial security as the idol you discovered you were worshiping
Therefore, my dear friends, flee - add the second comma for direct address
I love that you turn this on the reader in the last line. A most thoughtful and thought-provoking devotional piece. Brooke

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2012

reply by the author on 22-Jan-2012
    Thank you Brooke.
Comment from pnkglo
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You have an interesting topic to write about. Many people can relate to your story. In the first paragraph the last sentence is a little confusing. Financial responsibilities can be scary when we are alone. But we have to remember we are not alone. pnkglo

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2012

reply by the author on 17-Jan-2012
    Oh, you are so right. Thank you for catching that mixed up sentence. I am not sure what I did but I have corrected it. Reviews like this one, filled with honesty and still encouraging are so welcomed by this writer. Thank you again. -Judy
Comment from peggles
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I like the clear message you send with this story
It has tone and style in your perfect wording
a very enjoyable uplifting piece of writing
It read smoothly and easy to follow and understand
Well done

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2012

reply by the author on 17-Jan-2012
    Thank you, but this was not a poem and there is no rhythm or rhyme in my story. Perhaps you read another and were confused. Either way I appreciate your stopping by and taking time to write. -Judy
reply by peggles on 17-Jan-2012
    Hello Judy
    I have just been back to have a look at my review I did mix your up with another but I corrected as soon as I hit the send button I realised it straight away and re did it It looks correct but I did not get there soon enough Sorry
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2012
    Not a problem, I thought something like that happened. Happy writing.
Comment from TammyGail
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This was such a touching and heartfelt story, very well written and expressed. Loved your imagery used alongside your words as well as the scripture. Thanks for sharing it was a pleasure

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2012

reply by the author on 17-Jan-2012
    I am glad you enjoyed this and I appreciate the generous review -Judy
Comment from Misrael
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How true it is that we have to guard against having idols in our lives. they take many forms that is for sure.
I am sorry to hear of your loss. may God be with you.
I think that you have a real ministry with this sort of thing. Keep up the good work.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2012

reply by the author on 17-Jan-2012
    I appreciate your kind words and the encouragement you shared. -Judy
Comment from stanzasandstuff
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Beautifully written and incredibly honest. I believe that God sometimes leaves the room to give space to cry. He knows that its through tears that we learn to trust Him more completely. He knows we cannot see clearly when we cry. God Bless

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2012

reply by the author on 17-Jan-2012
    Thank you for this kid and generous review. -Judy