Comment from peggles

Excellent

Barbara this was as always very well written
Poor Anna you have to feel for her and who could want a mother in law like hers
A horrid old woman who she is so scared of
Very believable with realistic dialogue and characters
I shall be waiting to see what happens next

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2012

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Shadow Pahn

Excellent

Another great chapter Barbara, i will be looking out for your novel. Also, extra thumbs up for your quest on stopping domestic violence beyond the realms of fantasy

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2012

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

Ah, at last there's that
anticipated romance
between Troy and Anna...

church began it's recorded bells. -its
from the bedroom(.)
tomorrow evening[,](;) he can

So sorry I'm late in reviewing.
I've been spending time with
my widowed sister.

Margaret

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2012

Thank you for the kind review and support. I will fix that error.

Comment from Tonulak

Excellent

having read your note, I see the use of your style and pace. The scense and dialog were very natural and felt right. The relationship sems to be warming and you ended on a good cliff-hanging note. Great job.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2012

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Rdfrdmom2

Excellent

barbara:

I think you are doing a fine job of showing how
difficult it is for a woman to rebuild her self-
esteem after a nasty relationship like Anna was
involved in. Unless someone has been abused in
some way, they will likely never understand.

thanks for sharing
love,
jan

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2012

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from rchitwood

Excellent

As always very well written and I can see why Anna worries so. It is hard to trust once you have been in an abusive marriage. I wonder who she is scared of is it her husband's mom. Very believable and good dialogue and characters. Very creative writing and has good draw on the reader's attention. Blessings Rita

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2012

Thank you for your kind review.

Comment from RebelRose

Excellent

Another great chapter. Very well written and interesting. Sounds like Anna is still a little timid about trusting Troy's feelings for her. I look forward to the next chapter.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2012

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Fluffyhead

Excellent

Look forward to you postings. Like the part about surprise me and the part about are you goanna kiss me or not. That is a really hot country song right now. I don't know if you knew. Keep writing.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2012

HUMMM, I bet this country artist has been reading my notes. Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Janie King

Excellent

You can't help but feel the stress she feels at just trying to allow her life to change and yet know there is always an enemy lurking in the shadows. Good piece. God bless.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2012

Thank you for the kind review and support.

Comment from jadapenn

Excellent

Ugh, I'm so busy with other things I don't get to do my reviews or rewriting my book. I liked the progress in this chapter. Anna is building up her self esteem except the stupid muffler still irks her.

One little gremlin:


there's a lot of cars and truck[s] with loud mufflers."
luv jada

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2012

Thank you for the kind review and your eagle eye. I appreciate both.