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The importance of gaining knowledge

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Comment from linsbm
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As per requisite requirement of the contest, this poem mets the syllable count of 5-7-5. Logically, the message is correct. Having an empty bottle for instance, and not pouring any water in it, it will remain empty. Likewise, if you will not study to learn things, then your mind will become stagnant and dull. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2012

Comment from artemis53
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So very true. When your in a room with one of these all you wish to do is slap them. Excellent contest entry. best of luck on this piece.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2012