Comment from Veronica Grace

Excellent

Gosh Rdfrdmom you sure can entertain us with our daily moon and sunrise mornings. Wish I had noticed the events. Maybe I'll be lucky tomorrow. Good work

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2012

I didn't get up early enough today to notice whether or not the winter moon was still out so no new poem today -- sorry -- love, jan

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

That moon has been bright and beautiful this week. I love the picture and had fun reading the poem and reliving how excited a child can be when awakening to the beauty of nature. Excellent rhyme and rhythm. I like it! Honeycomb

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2012

thanks, Honeycomb -- love, jan

Comment from Piggies Grandma

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this poem about the moon too Rdfrdmom. It is cleverly written and very well thought out. It is a lovely picture and I understand why she liked seeing the moon in the day time.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2012

PG, Lexi is at the age to really notice things -- I'm trying to capture a lot of it for her for when she is older -- love, jan

Comment from ExperiencingLiphe

Excellent

It's always fun when a child sees something we might not see and then have us get inspired enough to write a poem about. Simply remarkable :)

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2012

yes, it is, my young friend. love, jan

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

Hi Grandma!! You are as happy as a lark in you new found role. I'm glad for you. I have seen this "day moon" and it is unique to say the least.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2012

yes, it is -- will have a new one in a few minutes plus a picture from my own camera -- love, jan

reply by Gungalo on 15-Jan-2012

Great!!

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Exceptional

Your poem is perfect and it explains the excitment a child feels at the morning moon. Your poem flowed freely making it a joy to read.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2012

thanks for this exceptional rating, barbara -- Lexi gets so excited it is easy for me to get excited -- love, jan

Comment from mumsyone

Excellent

This is another cute poem about the morning moon. It's a nice presentation, too. I like the form you took for your poem; light and fun.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2012

thanks, mumsyone -- #3 is on the way -- love, jan

Comment from heyjude

Excellent

Jan, children can inspire out writing. They get excited
and come out with such cute thoughts. I like the thought
about the moon might have come back again to play.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2012

wait until you see today's take on the morning winter moon, jude -- love, jan

Comment from Lady & Louis

Excellent

Oh, he's the strong silent type, eh? Maybe he came back to see his little fan! I see the morning moon often, going to work. I'll think of you and Lexi next time I do. :)

Love,
Louise

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2012

thanks, milady -- we would be honored -- love, jan

reply by Lady & Louis on 15-Jan-2012

I thought of you two at lunchtime - one of the guys came in from taking a walk and said the crescent moon was visible! :)

Comment from Jewell McChesney

Excellent

How cute is that? Loved this little ditty... I can see it as a little children's book. Just add a few more verses about the evening and mid day moon too.
Just ideas! I really did enjoy this. :-)
Good luck with it!

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2012

what good ideas, Visionary Poet777 -- we'll see what we can do -- love, jan