Dear Lexi
Viewing comments for Chapter 56 "Morning Moon""Let the little children come unto me." ~ Jesus
21 total reviews
Comment from Veronica Grace
So often I have witnessed these events but I could not have put the wonder of it in the beauty of your words. The picture captures it exquisitly.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2012
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So often I have witnessed these events but I could not have put the wonder of it in the beauty of your words. The picture captures it exquisitly.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2012
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thanks so much, Veronica Grace -- love, jan
Comment from Piggies Grandma
I enjoyed reading your poem very much. It is cleverly written and very well thought out. The moon looks very lovely when it's up in the daytime.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2012
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I enjoyed reading your poem very much. It is cleverly written and very well thought out. The moon looks very lovely when it's up in the daytime.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2012
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yes it does, PG -- love, jan
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Again, it's the thoughts of children that can draw up so many things for us writers. My dad and I used to sit and go back and forth about what the thing in the moon looked like. It was like looking up and trying to figure out what the clouds looked like :)
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2012
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Again, it's the thoughts of children that can draw up so many things for us writers. My dad and I used to sit and go back and forth about what the thing in the moon looked like. It was like looking up and trying to figure out what the clouds looked like :)
Comment Written 15-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2012
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WIVA Red Bird: I'll be posting a new one about the morning moon tonight -- love, jan
Comment from Showboat
Wonderful poem here, Jan. The moon has such a draw, I
think most people feel that sense of awe when you look
outside the window in the morning and there's the moon! I love it when they're just 'pingernail' size. So did my grandson Shane.
Great job,
Hugs,
Gayle
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2012
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Wonderful poem here, Jan. The moon has such a draw, I
think most people feel that sense of awe when you look
outside the window in the morning and there's the moon! I love it when they're just 'pingernail' size. So did my grandson Shane.
Great job,
Hugs,
Gayle
Comment Written 15-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2012
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thanks, Gayle -- btw, got the canvas of the new book cover today -- absolutely stunning -- love, jan
Comment from babylonia
jan,
how is lexi? good, i hope. i love when the moon stays around even in the daytime. i love the picture. wow~ three already? how did she get so big? i know but really, she is supposed to be a baby. LOL
love,
barbara
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2012
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jan,
how is lexi? good, i hope. i love when the moon stays around even in the daytime. i love the picture. wow~ three already? how did she get so big? i know but really, she is supposed to be a baby. LOL
love,
barbara
Comment Written 14-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2012
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I know, barbara -- and just the other night, I realized she really is turning into a little lady -- love, jan
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jan,
wow~ i bet she is.
how cool is that?
love,
barbara
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I understand what you are saying. The school I teach at starts at 7:30, when many of my first graders come to school the moon is still shining bright as the sun rises. They always rush to tell me. Children are just plain fun.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2012
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I understand what you are saying. The school I teach at starts at 7:30, when many of my first graders come to school the moon is still shining bright as the sun rises. They always rush to tell me. Children are just plain fun.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2012
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yes, children are my favorite people, barbara -- love, jan
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Jan I liked your poem about seeing the moon in the moring
Yes it is a beautful sight.
You did well when you said--
the unexpected guest
of this fine day
the dimly lit moon
became
undeniably
the morning star
Smiles
Gert
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2012
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Hello Jan I liked your poem about seeing the moon in the moring
Yes it is a beautful sight.
You did well when you said--
the unexpected guest
of this fine day
the dimly lit moon
became
undeniably
the morning star
Smiles
Gert
Comment Written 14-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2012
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thanks, Gert -- love, jan
Comment from Gungalo
I call it day moon. I even wrote a poem about it. Must say, its an all encompassing thing, to see the moon in the day. Lexi must have been thrilled.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2012
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I call it day moon. I even wrote a poem about it. Must say, its an all encompassing thing, to see the moon in the day. Lexi must have been thrilled.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2012
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yes, Gungalo -- she notices everything and seems to do a good job of keeping them in their right place in her mind -- love, jan
Comment from mumsyone
Your granddaughter sounds so much like mine, when she was about that age. The moon in the morning sky always fascinated her; and "Goodnight Moon" was our favorite book. But who am I to talk? I've always been fascinated with the moon in the daytime, too! Great poem. Thanks for bringing back some fond memories.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2012
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Your granddaughter sounds so much like mine, when she was about that age. The moon in the morning sky always fascinated her; and "Goodnight Moon" was our favorite book. But who am I to talk? I've always been fascinated with the moon in the daytime, too! Great poem. Thanks for bringing back some fond memories.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2012
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mumsyone, Lexi can "read" Goodnight Moon but actually it's more like she can recite Goodnight Moon and is so proud of herself while doing so -- thanks for sharing -- love, jan
Comment from heyjude
Jan, I like the part about the unexpected guest of this
fine day the dimly lit moon became undeniably the morning
star. Isn't it wonderful how God's world inspires us to
write?
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2012
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Jan, I like the part about the unexpected guest of this
fine day the dimly lit moon became undeniably the morning
star. Isn't it wonderful how God's world inspires us to
write?
Comment Written 14-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2012
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yes, jude -- this poem nagged at me all day until I finally sat down and allowed my pen to cross the paper -- love, jan
