Afternoon Doldrums
Just bored and trapped at work.12 total reviews
Comment from reconciled
Sounds like my life! If only I could write for a living! I believe I could be content, but I'm probably wrong.Grass alway's looks green-blah blah-blah.Anyhoo, Great write and read.God bless you-Michael.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2012
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Sounds like my life! If only I could write for a living! I believe I could be content, but I'm probably wrong.Grass alway's looks green-blah blah-blah.Anyhoo, Great write and read.God bless you-Michael.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2012
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Thanks Michael. If does seem like my life is kind of feast or famine. :o) I have some of the most boring days and then I'll have one that is waaay too much excitement. LOL I'm a school nurse at a very busy elem. school with lots of special needs kiddos. Seizures, vomiting, allergic reactions, asthma attacks...etc, etc. all part of a normal day. :o) Glad you could relate to my poem. :o)
Comment from LoveLifeKnight
this is something many people relate to including me, but im trying to see magic and poetic potential in everything i do. your poem helps
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2012
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this is something many people relate to including me, but im trying to see magic and poetic potential in everything i do. your poem helps
Comment Written 17-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2012
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Thank you for your kind review of my poem. I am glad you liked it.
Comment from Eleanor Buron
Stuck in the "brig" of work! I can relate to that. ;) You have great illusions here - I love your poem; it is humorous and speaks to a lot of people! I especially like the last stanza, although they are all good and you do an excellent job with end rhyme.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2012
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Stuck in the "brig" of work! I can relate to that. ;) You have great illusions here - I love your poem; it is humorous and speaks to a lot of people! I especially like the last stanza, although they are all good and you do an excellent job with end rhyme.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2012
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Thank you Elly for reviewing my poem. I am glad you liked it. Got to be careful what you complain about...today, been so busy...no time to be bored. :o)
Comment from michaelrandolph
For a poem created just because of boredom, I like it, funny, imaginative, well written. The rhyming of it makes it flow through all the stanzas well. Great!
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2012
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For a poem created just because of boredom, I like it, funny, imaginative, well written. The rhyming of it makes it flow through all the stanzas well. Great!
Comment Written 12-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2012
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Thank you Michael for reviewing my poem. I'm glad you thought it was funny. Got to be careful what you complain about...today, been so busy...no time to be bored. :o)
Comment from TammyGail
Lol.. Sometimes I do indeed feel the same. I enjoyed your clever and witty jot. Great imagery used alongside your poem of that pondering of bigger and better things :) Thanks for sharing it was a pleasure
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2012
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Lol.. Sometimes I do indeed feel the same. I enjoyed your clever and witty jot. Great imagery used alongside your poem of that pondering of bigger and better things :) Thanks for sharing it was a pleasure
Comment Written 12-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2012
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Thank you Tammy for your kind review of my poem. I am glad it gave you a laugh.
Comment from artemis53
Great! we all do that. High expectations are soon squashed down to manageable ones. One attribute that human's have is the capacity to dream.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2012
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Great! we all do that. High expectations are soon squashed down to manageable ones. One attribute that human's have is the capacity to dream.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2012
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I am glad you liked my poem. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Betty517
Very creative and oh so true Jo! I too wonder what I would do and I guess that means your poem is working on me as well! Great read!
Betty
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2012
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Very creative and oh so true Jo! I too wonder what I would do and I guess that means your poem is working on me as well! Great read!
Betty
Comment Written 12-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2012
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Thanks Betty for reading my poem. I am glad you liked it. Got to be careful what you complain about...today, been so busy...no time to be bored. :o)
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Busy is good!
Comment from curious67
Even your author notes rhyme! This is so relative to my day right now...just watching the clock...
I love humorous poems and yours was certainly enjoyable. Thank you very much for posting and sharing this!
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2012
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Even your author notes rhyme! This is so relative to my day right now...just watching the clock...
I love humorous poems and yours was certainly enjoyable. Thank you very much for posting and sharing this!
Comment Written 12-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2012
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I am glad you liked my poem. I like humorous poems, too. :o) Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from l.raven
Very clever. I do know what that feeling can feel like. But trust me when I say. It's more boring not to be working. Because when you've done all you want to do in life. There's nothing left. You have to start over. Great write. Well written.and very cute!!!!
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2012
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Very clever. I do know what that feeling can feel like. But trust me when I say. It's more boring not to be working. Because when you've done all you want to do in life. There's nothing left. You have to start over. Great write. Well written.and very cute!!!!
Comment Written 12-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2012
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Thank you for reviewing my poem. I am glad you liked it.
Comment from Overdog McNab
Amen Sister! You've given voice to everyone who chooses to trade hours of life for dollars. 'Course, I work with toys, so I really don't have a reason to complain, but I've shared the feelings in this poem before.
Well done! Thanks!
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2012
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Amen Sister! You've given voice to everyone who chooses to trade hours of life for dollars. 'Course, I work with toys, so I really don't have a reason to complain, but I've shared the feelings in this poem before.
Well done! Thanks!
Comment Written 12-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2012
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I think anyone who works have felt this way one time or another. However, got to be careful what I complain about. Today, so busy. Oh well, feast or famine. :o)
