Comment from peggles

Excellent

I liked this very much
and thought it to be well expressed and very creative in its content
the rhyme and the rhythm were excellent
The story was interesting and held my attention
This was a well written piece
well done

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2012

Thank you so much for the great review. I appreciate it very much.

Comment from pickthorn

Excellent

A lovely poem with great imagery. You describe Vegas really well and you describe the beauty of the surrounding scenery perfectly. But Vegas didn't treat me too kindly during my visit to that gambling mecca. I was lucky I had a credit card to get back home.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2012

Thank you for the great review. Vegas is multidimensional, and gambling is only one facet of it

Comment from Herb

Excellent

Well that was certainly a 'mouth full'

I can only tip my hat to a poet much more skilled than I. One sonnet is hard enough.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2012

Thank you for your thorough, and very helpful review.

Comment from Anisa-

Excellent

This is an interesting and enjoyable poem. I like the imagery in it. Great job on this creative write. Fantastic picture choice, too. Well done, thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2012

Thank you for the great review

Comment from Zombie's Woof

Excellent

Hi-

Great place, like any gambling town,
to lose your shirt and maybe everything.
Although I just read it quickly, I
did notice that your meter was perfect
and the imagery was quite fine.
Lot of work, this one...

Nice job! ZW

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2012

Thank you very much for your review.

Comment from rchitwood

Excellent

I have heard that Vegas is a very beautiful place. I could feel the love you have for the deserts and the mountains and valleys. Very good structure and smooth flow as well as creative description. Your photo is very lovely and goes well with your poem. Blessings Rita

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2012

Thank you so much for the great review, Rita. It means a lot to me. Blessings and love, Yelena

Comment from TammyGail

Excellent

yeltel this was just wow, what a poem indeed
I loved the Sonnets, always thought this form has such a romantic flow to it beat. Your poem was deep and touching, heartfelt and very well written. Stunning imagery used, thanks for sharing it was a pleasure

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2012

Thank you so much for the amazing review, Tammy. It means a lot to me. Love and blessings, Y.

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

An absolute must to read! Your sonnets are amazing, really easy to read, excellent flow, a great story, amazing imagery.
And after the pain at the beginning of your poem, a feeling of wellbeing at the end. A classic well penned poem. An excellent contest entry. xsx

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2012

Thank you so much for your wonderful review and your faith in my work. They mean the world to me. Love, Y.

Comment from mumsyone

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your crown on sonnets--probably the best I've ever read here on FanStory. Every part is easy to read and understand and it does not get boring, as some do. Good work!

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2012

Thank you very much for your most gracious review.

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

A well written string of Sonnets with great rhyming and the iambic meter works perfectly throughout. Glad the healing lifted you back. Well crafted! Les

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2012

Thank you so much for the great review. I appreciate it very much.