~ The Beginning Life ~
A Haiku of a tree15 total reviews
Comment from Penny 4 your thought
This is a great poem, beautifully depicts the strength in a tree. Well written, artistically expressed. Well done.
This poem flows well. A solid five
Thank you for sharing.
Penny
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2012
This is a great poem, beautifully depicts the strength in a tree. Well written, artistically expressed. Well done.
This poem flows well. A solid five
Thank you for sharing.
Penny
Comment Written 10-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2012
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WOW....thank you so very much Penny!! You have given me a much needed smile tonight. :)
Comment from justjo66
A beautiful picture. Fall is my
favorite time of year. I love all the
autumn colors. You have done a fine
job with this poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2012
A beautiful picture. Fall is my
favorite time of year. I love all the
autumn colors. You have done a fine
job with this poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2012
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Fall is definately a beautifully and amazing time of year. Thank you for stopping by to read and comment on this. :)
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, mystery writer, you did a great job writing this haiku poem about the way life begins and ends with the changing seasons, i enjoyed reading it and wish you the best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2012
this is very well written, mystery writer, you did a great job writing this haiku poem about the way life begins and ends with the changing seasons, i enjoyed reading it and wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2012
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I'm so grateful you got my true meaning out of my poem. You gave me a very much needed smile tonight.....thank you!! :)
Comment from Modee
Very nice. The colors of autumn and the words used make this a very pretty entry into the contest. Good luck. This one is beautifully written and displayed. :)
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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2012
Very nice. The colors of autumn and the words used make this a very pretty entry into the contest. Good luck. This one is beautifully written and displayed. :)
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Comment Written 10-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2012
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Thank you kindly for the great comment and rating!! :)
Comment from ScarletClearwater
This was a nice message and a beautiful portrayal of fall. I like the idea of life starting under the leaves. Good job with this short.
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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2012
This was a nice message and a beautiful portrayal of fall. I like the idea of life starting under the leaves. Good job with this short.
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Comment Written 10-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2012
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Thank you so very much my friend!! :)