~ The Beginning Life ~
A Haiku of a tree15 total reviews
Comment from Celestina Waters
I enjoyed this poem and photo very much as I too feel the trees shedding is a dusting off. Ready to relax and save energy for the blast of spring. Good job!
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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I enjoyed this poem and photo very much as I too feel the trees shedding is a dusting off. Ready to relax and save energy for the blast of spring. Good job!
Comment Written 17-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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Thank you so very much!! xoxo
Comment from MidnightWriter4U
Very beautiful artwork choice for this 3-5-3 poem. A nontraditional haiku with nature theme. A very good descriptive work about the circle of life. Emphatic last line a great choice without being an extension of the first two lines. Enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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Very beautiful artwork choice for this 3-5-3 poem. A nontraditional haiku with nature theme. A very good descriptive work about the circle of life. Emphatic last line a great choice without being an extension of the first two lines. Enjoyable read.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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Thank you so very much my sweet friend........xoxo
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You are very welcome. MN :)
Comment from skye
Ash, the beauty of the autumn trees is a good subject in the middle of the cold winter, reminding us of how much we count on the cycle of seasons.
Well done.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Ash, the beauty of the autumn trees is a good subject in the middle of the cold winter, reminding us of how much we count on the cycle of seasons.
Well done.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Thank you deeply skye for the amazing rating and comment....
Comment from elliejean
I love the picture. I love the poem. I like how you say 'new life starts". The dead leaves are protecting the fragile life below the tree. Great work.a
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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I love the picture. I love the poem. I like how you say 'new life starts". The dead leaves are protecting the fragile life below the tree. Great work.a
Comment Written 11-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Thank you so much for the great review and high amount of stars. I deeply appreciate it.
Comment from HuntersMoon
Great form. I enjoyed the imagery of the transition to spring - from the old, new. Well done.
Best of luck in the contest
Ken
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Great form. I enjoyed the imagery of the transition to spring - from the old, new. Well done.
Best of luck in the contest
Ken
Comment Written 11-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Thank you so much Ken!!
Comment from gazzagodbod
what a fantastic haiku contest great entries and i love yours fantastic presentation and your poem is wonderful good luck my friend gazza
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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what a fantastic haiku contest great entries and i love yours fantastic presentation and your poem is wonderful good luck my friend gazza
Comment Written 11-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Thank you so much!!
Comment from robyn corum
First the picture is gorgeous!! Second, I was impressed with your haiku as well. You followed the strictures of the contest and made it look effortless. Good job
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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First the picture is gorgeous!! Second, I was impressed with your haiku as well. You followed the strictures of the contest and made it look effortless. Good job
Comment Written 11-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Sorry it has taken me so long to thank you for your awesome review and rating......deeply appreciated!!
Comment from missy98writer
Mystery Poet,
Your haiku is very well written with teriffic imagery that paints a mental picture in the readers head. The art work is pretty you used. Your haiku is in fine form with correct syllable count. You used great alliteration with the L and S words. Your sarori line is effective. I wish you good luck in the Nature Haiku writing prompt contest with your excellent haiku. I love your poem. I'd recommend your poem to others. Please have a lovely day and keep on rocking the creative poetry.
Missy.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Mystery Poet,
Your haiku is very well written with teriffic imagery that paints a mental picture in the readers head. The art work is pretty you used. Your haiku is in fine form with correct syllable count. You used great alliteration with the L and S words. Your sarori line is effective. I wish you good luck in the Nature Haiku writing prompt contest with your excellent haiku. I love your poem. I'd recommend your poem to others. Please have a lovely day and keep on rocking the creative poetry.
Missy.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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I apologize for taking so long to thank you for the amazing review and high rating!! xoxo
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This carries a nice upbeat message that the dying, falling leaves are the beginning of resurrection of life later. Good luck, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2012
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This carries a nice upbeat message that the dying, falling leaves are the beginning of resurrection of life later. Good luck, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 10-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2012
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Thank you so much for reading, commenting and rating my work. It's very appreciated. :)
Comment from rchitwood
Very good 3-5-3 I have read so many good haiku's like this. Yours is very creative and creates the image of new life in the readers mind. I had fun reading so much description in just a few words. Your photo compliments your poem. Blessings Rita
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2012
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Very good 3-5-3 I have read so many good haiku's like this. Yours is very creative and creates the image of new life in the readers mind. I had fun reading so much description in just a few words. Your photo compliments your poem. Blessings Rita
Comment Written 10-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2012
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Thank you deeply Rita for the wonderful comment and great rating. :)
