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Dear Lexi

Viewing comments for Chapter 52 "Carousel"
"Let the little children come unto me." ~ Jesus

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Comment from HalfHoff
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I have only one problem with this and that is WHY WASN'T I INVITED? I mean, jeepers, I would have passed on the slide, but the carousel? COMEON!!! LOVED IT MUCH AS YOU DID! XXOO

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2012
    I couldn't find you -- but it is the second weekend of October every year and kiddie day is the Friday of the weekend so I am inviting you for 2012 right now -- love, jan
Comment from keondae
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I wish I had a grandkid like Lexi. I wish I could ride a carousel with my grandkid. What a good picture! How beautifully and well-written with a good rhyming!
Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2012
    I would ride carousels with her all day if I could find a place to do so and had enough quarters to feed the machine -- love, jan
Comment from artemis53
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I am now a 'Nana' and it brings me great joy to relive my childhood for the third time. This time I can experience it through little girls (I was a tomboy).

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2012
    artemis53: I was a tomboy, my daughter was a tomboy, and this is going to be, too -- however, my daughter knew how to be a young lady, too -- I'm hoping Lexi will do the same -- love, jan
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I enjoy reading about times you have shared with your granddaughter. I wish more children had you for a grandmother. The world would be a better place.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2012
    thank you so much, barbara -- I am humbled -- love, jan
Comment from Rahul@ISM_India
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So cute!
Very well penned poem loved your artwork the most,Your granddaughter is looking so cute and sweet,your poem is so descriptive,nice expressions
Great work!to Lexi !! :D

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2012
    thank you on Lexi's behalf, Rahul -- love, jan
Comment from Artasylum
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what a sweet and luscious little poem slice of life of the best day of your life.. i'll take that... beautifully presented and beautifully penned... thanks for this refreshing piece i can feel the breeze of the carousel. thanks, yours, diana

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2012
    diana, Lexi told me the other day I was her best friend -- no higher praise, I'm thinking -- love, jan
reply by Artasylum on 14-Jan-2012
    i have missed you most of all love, di
Comment from wordsfromsue
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I like this a lot! You've captured the childhood joy of a day at the amusement park in a winning poem.
The phofo is adorable. :-) You are one cool Nanny! You two squeezed every drop of fun and love out of this experience. How brilliant is that?! Wonderful writing. :-)

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2012
    wordsfromsue: Lexi and I have lots of fun together. I try to capture as much as I can of it in pictures and words. love, jan
Comment from DreamChaser
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Your words painted vivid pictures in my head and brought back great memories. It sounds like you both had a wonderful day. Love the picture too.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2012
    thanks, DreamChaser: Lexi and I have lots of fun together. I try to capture as much as I can of it in pictures and words. love, jan
Comment from percival86jack
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What a sweet little poem and what a sweet little granddaughter called Lexi... love her name! Looks like you guys are having a blast! Love your poem. Hugs, Jack xxxxxxx

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012
    thanks, Jack -- yes, she's my little buddy -- love, jan
Comment from Piggies Grandma
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This is a lovely poem and it sounds like you both had a wonderful day. I enjoyed reading it very much. It is cleverly written and very well thought out.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012
    thanks, PG -- I love taking her places like this -- love, jan
reply by Piggies Grandma on 12-Jan-2012
    She's a lucky little girl to have you ;0)