Lonely Hearts Meet
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb
You still amaze me
What is with Anna.
My question is when in the world is she ever get some self confidence in herself
Did your dear hubby paint the picture of the Indian blanket?
I'm a bit confused what you are saying here-
My muse is being a pain in the butt. It's wanting me to start a new novel with New Orleans as the setting. I've only been there twice. Besides I tend to be a perfectionist and HAVE to finish Anna before I tackle anything else. When I don't listen to her, she keeps me up nights pleading her case. Would somebody like to take a muse off my hands? She's going really cheap, right now.
Don't listen to you muse go by your own gut feelings my FS friend
Gert
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2012
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Hello Barb
You still amaze me
What is with Anna.
My question is when in the world is she ever get some self confidence in herself
Did your dear hubby paint the picture of the Indian blanket?
I'm a bit confused what you are saying here-
My muse is being a pain in the butt. It's wanting me to start a new novel with New Orleans as the setting. I've only been there twice. Besides I tend to be a perfectionist and HAVE to finish Anna before I tackle anything else. When I don't listen to her, she keeps me up nights pleading her case. Would somebody like to take a muse off my hands? She's going really cheap, right now.
Don't listen to you muse go by your own gut feelings my FS friend
Gert
Comment Written 08-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2012
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I plan on finishing this story before I start my next one. I just wish my muse would give up and let me sleep. Thank you for the kind review and your support.
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You are so welcome
Love
Gert
Comment from RazberryBullet
Too bad Anna thinks so little of herself and her accomplishments...I'm probably nothing more than his pet project for this month.
I'm betting on Troy's going to show her how valuable she is to him. ;0
Well done!
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2012
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Too bad Anna thinks so little of herself and her accomplishments...I'm probably nothing more than his pet project for this month.
I'm betting on Troy's going to show her how valuable she is to him. ;0
Well done!
Comment Written 08-Jan-2012
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I bet he does, but who knows. Thank you for the kind reveiw.
Comment from missy98writer
Barbara,
Anna needs a bost of my moxie. She needs to stop fresking herself out. Your latest chapter is teriffic and professionally written. You may want to listen to your muse and write out what she's telling you to do. I've been to New Orleans back when I was walking and Tchinina were alive . It was a super thrilling trip. We ate at Emerald's flag skip resturant Emerald's. Bam! The art work of your hubby's is funky cool. Let's get groovy, that ain't no jive turkey. I digress, your dialogue is so natural. I like the banter between Troy and Anna. My iPod Touch giving me hell so I'm going to save & come back to finish my review. Melissa.
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Barbara,
Anna needs a bost of my moxie. She needs to stop fresking herself out. Your latest chapter is teriffic and professionally written. You may want to listen to your muse and write out what she's telling you to do. I've been to New Orleans back when I was walking and Tchinina were alive . It was a super thrilling trip. We ate at Emerald's flag skip resturant Emerald's. Bam! The art work of your hubby's is funky cool. Let's get groovy, that ain't no jive turkey. I digress, your dialogue is so natural. I like the banter between Troy and Anna. My iPod Touch giving me hell so I'm going to save & come back to finish my review. Melissa.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2012
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I want to finish Anna or I never will. I had planned on posting something else after Anna, but I have a feeling New Orleans here we come. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Belinda
Hi, what an amazing picture of an Indian Blanket with chains. This is priceless as your special artist does it especially for you! Does he read all your posts? Here I see you're emphasizing the doubts and insecurity of Anna as the victim of abuse. Interesting as ever, written fluently with a good pace.
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Hi, what an amazing picture of an Indian Blanket with chains. This is priceless as your special artist does it especially for you! Does he read all your posts? Here I see you're emphasizing the doubts and insecurity of Anna as the victim of abuse. Interesting as ever, written fluently with a good pace.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2012
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My husband hates romance so doesn't read anything I post. Go figure. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gungalo
You are so lucky in that this is the only thing you'll pay attention to right now. I thing she'll find that he not only sees her as a project but a permanent one. Sigh ...
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You are so lucky in that this is the only thing you'll pay attention to right now. I thing she'll find that he not only sees her as a project but a permanent one. Sigh ...
Comment Written 08-Jan-2012
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I think you may be right, but we will have to see. Thank you for the kind review.
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Fingers crossed!!
Comment from Dave M
Barbara,
Too bad about your muse, they can be difficult. You can borrow mine if you can stand him, although he's been commenting that he'd like to help babylonia.
I really liked the drawing your husband made. It could be an excellent cover if you publish this book.
I enjoyed the chapter and found nothing to criticize. Anna is really conflicted and down on herself, as a real woman in her position would be. I'm wondering if that "loud muffler" belongs to someone who knows nothing about Bobby but wants Anna to be his next victim.
Dave
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Barbara,
Too bad about your muse, they can be difficult. You can borrow mine if you can stand him, although he's been commenting that he'd like to help babylonia.
I really liked the drawing your husband made. It could be an excellent cover if you publish this book.
I enjoyed the chapter and found nothing to criticize. Anna is really conflicted and down on herself, as a real woman in her position would be. I'm wondering if that "loud muffler" belongs to someone who knows nothing about Bobby but wants Anna to be his next victim.
Dave
Comment Written 08-Jan-2012
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Good idea, I hadn't thought that one. I am sure your muse would get along better with babylonia than me anyway. Thank you for the offer and the kind review.
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
A good write with imagery and flows it's contents are well written and displayed well. a good read and enjoyable. Thanks for sharing with me.
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A good write with imagery and flows it's contents are well written and displayed well. a good read and enjoyable. Thanks for sharing with me.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from AprilShower
Hi, Barbara. Did your husband use pastels, water paints or something else for this picture of an Indian blanket with chains around it? Why an Indian blanket?
It looks like Anna might be interested in Troy. I think he might also be interested in her, but he wants to give her time to recuperate from her bad marriage. Good story.
April
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Hi, Barbara. Did your husband use pastels, water paints or something else for this picture of an Indian blanket with chains around it? Why an Indian blanket?
It looks like Anna might be interested in Troy. I think he might also be interested in her, but he wants to give her time to recuperate from her bad marriage. Good story.
April
Comment Written 08-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2012
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He used water color and pencil. Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome, Barbara.
Comment from Mara del Mar
A good chapter as always, congrats Barbara. The situation of Anna now is whole different and need of time for take conscience of this.
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A good chapter as always, congrats Barbara. The situation of Anna now is whole different and need of time for take conscience of this.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
I think you did another fine chapter. I enjoyed where Anna seems more relaxed around Troy and the family.
Seems to be moving forward well.
Nothing stuck out that needed attention...though I am starting to question the loud muffler or backfires...
Well written and a good read.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
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I think you did another fine chapter. I enjoyed where Anna seems more relaxed around Troy and the family.
Seems to be moving forward well.
Nothing stuck out that needed attention...though I am starting to question the loud muffler or backfires...
Well written and a good read.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 08-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2012
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The muffler is a key piece of information. Thank you for the kind review.
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I thought that myself ...thus why I got a wee bit excited every time I hear it...or read it...:)
Hugs
Maureen
