What Are All Those Spots?
Cyril the Squirrel has chickenpox38 total reviews
Comment from Artasylum
How great and I will keep up with their antics, fun and adventures. I need to live vicariously through fun creatures... thanks so much for the read. yours, diana.....
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2012
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How great and I will keep up with their antics, fun and adventures. I need to live vicariously through fun creatures... thanks so much for the read. yours, diana.....
Comment Written 09-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2012
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Thank you so much, Diana, I hope you will enjoy my next one,it's coming up soon. I really do appreciate your feedback. xsx
Comment from astara
Wow! Being a Kindergarten teacher, I can easily see my kids loving this. Please do publish this and more. It's simply adorable! I love your choice of words, the rhyme and flow are spot on. Bravo!
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2012
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Wow! Being a Kindergarten teacher, I can easily see my kids loving this. Please do publish this and more. It's simply adorable! I love your choice of words, the rhyme and flow are spot on. Bravo!
Comment Written 09-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2012
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What a lovely review, I really appreciate it, especially coming from a Kindergarten teacher, thaat is very high praise. Thank you!
Comment from adewpearl
Your lines have a good steady cadence and the rhyming couplets are strong, which make for a good read-aloud children's story poem
Cyril the Squirrel's - add apostrophe for implied possessive
good proximate rhyme of spots and pox
You tell a good story of how childhood diseases spread like wildfire :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2012
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Your lines have a good steady cadence and the rhyming couplets are strong, which make for a good read-aloud children's story poem
Cyril the Squirrel's - add apostrophe for implied possessive
good proximate rhyme of spots and pox
You tell a good story of how childhood diseases spread like wildfire :-) Brooke
Comment Written 09-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2012
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Thank you so much, Brooke, you review does mean a lot to me, thank you! xsx
Comment from alexisleech
I am SO pleased you reviewed something of mine which led me first to your profile, and then to this. It's absolutely brilliant! Honestly, the rhyme and flow (sorry cadence!) are spot on, as is the content. I so look forward to reading more and I'm certain a publisher would love this. Good luck!
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2012
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I am SO pleased you reviewed something of mine which led me first to your profile, and then to this. It's absolutely brilliant! Honestly, the rhyme and flow (sorry cadence!) are spot on, as is the content. I so look forward to reading more and I'm certain a publisher would love this. Good luck!
Comment Written 09-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2012
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Well! if that is not a good review then I don't know what is! Thank you so, so much. xsx
Comment from rawahymis
Interesting and lively story, Sandra.
Reads well and has a clearly established location and situation.
Pleasant with changing scenarios and witty humour.
Easy read for children.
Handles the spread of chickenpox in a light and tactical manner.
Best wishes.
rawahy
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2012
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Interesting and lively story, Sandra.
Reads well and has a clearly established location and situation.
Pleasant with changing scenarios and witty humour.
Easy read for children.
Handles the spread of chickenpox in a light and tactical manner.
Best wishes.
rawahy
Comment Written 09-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2012
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Thank you, rawahy, for such a informed review! I really appreciate your views, thank you.
Comment from Piggies Grandma
I enjoyed reading your poem very much sandra. It is cleverly written and very well thought out. I think children would like hearing them, especially when they may be sick too.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2012
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I enjoyed reading your poem very much sandra. It is cleverly written and very well thought out. I think children would like hearing them, especially when they may be sick too.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2012
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Thank you, Piggies Grandma! That is a lovely review. I have always wanted to ask you, but thought you might think me a bit rude, but, your Granddaughter/son, isn't really called Piggie? I have funny names for mine!! Thank you for the review, again, Happy 2012! xsx
Comment from laren
A tender nursery rhyme, which tells of a measles epidemic, cute story contained in a poem. Something that looked more in other times and now vaccines have eradicated.
It is a poem with rhythm and rhyme that children needed to be loved.
Congratulations!
Laren
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2012
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A tender nursery rhyme, which tells of a measles epidemic, cute story contained in a poem. Something that looked more in other times and now vaccines have eradicated.
It is a poem with rhythm and rhyme that children needed to be loved.
Congratulations!
Laren
Comment Written 09-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2012
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Thank you, laren, I am glad you liked my poem. Thank you for such a nice review. xsx
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Thank you for sharing,
Laren
Comment from rhymelord
Dear Sandra,
I love kiddies' poems. The necessity to maintain a simple, but insistent rhyme and metre to get the kids in and hold them is so terribly important as is, of course, the need to address subjects which they can understand but which also stimulates their interest. Yo have succeeded admirably on all counts here.
Regards
Reg
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2012
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Dear Sandra,
I love kiddies' poems. The necessity to maintain a simple, but insistent rhyme and metre to get the kids in and hold them is so terribly important as is, of course, the need to address subjects which they can understand but which also stimulates their interest. Yo have succeeded admirably on all counts here.
Regards
Reg
Comment Written 09-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2012
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Thank you so much for such a wonderful review, I really appreciate your views on my work. xsx
Comment from ScarletClearwater
For a long piece, this had wonderful flow. It was playful and made me smile. Cute imagery with good use of descriptives. Great job!
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2012
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For a long piece, this had wonderful flow. It was playful and made me smile. Cute imagery with good use of descriptives. Great job!
Comment Written 08-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2012
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Thank you, Scarlet, thank you for such a lovely review! xsx
Comment from mcorbinrn
What a delightful poem. Thank you for the fun read. I loved the wording, the rhyme and the story it told. Very good job.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2012
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What a delightful poem. Thank you for the fun read. I loved the wording, the rhyme and the story it told. Very good job.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2012
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Thank you again!! xsx
