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Cyril the Squirrel has chickenpox

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Comment from ameen786
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Hello Sandra, my friend this is a delightful read with a lovely story told in excellent rhyming; great entertainment for children, parents and grandparents.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2012

reply by the author on 12-Jan-2012
    Thank you, ameen! I never thought of parents and grandparents when I was writing these poems, but now I think of it, we are all children at heart, arn't we! Thank you for such a lovely review, xsx
Comment from JMonroe
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Oh no! chickenpox!
This is a very cute poem. I would try to submit it to local children's magazines if i were you. Very catchy and easy to follow. Wonderful job!

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2012

reply by the author on 12-Jan-2012
    Thank you! I have not thought of that, I will certainly look into that idea. Thank you for reviewing my poem and for the really helpful sugestion. xsx
Comment from Espresso momma
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Do you test these on your grand children to get their thoughts. I have done this with my grand children a little and it is interesting how they helped me. Thanks for the nice story.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2012

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012
    Thank you, and yes I do, my eldest grand daughter reads my poems and tell me what she thinks. She can be a quite demanding critic! Which is good. Thank you again. xsx
Comment from wordsfromsue
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This is endearing. I know I'm a big kid, but I loved it and fell right Into the adventure. I vote for a whole book of your stories.

Lovely story!

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2012

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012
    Thank you, Sue! What a lovely review, Thank you so much! xsx
Comment from Anisa-
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That was very cute! A good read :) The rhyme and flow was fantastic. I really enjoyed it and I'm sure children will too. Thanks for posting.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2012

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012
    Thank you so much, what a lovely review!! xsx
Comment from Veronica Grace
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I am loving your wonderful creature stories. I am sure they it will go well for you upon publication. Don't change a thing. You have done a fantastic job.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2012

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012
    Thank you, Veronica, I am so pleased you liked it, thank you for a lovely review! xsx
Comment from Rahul@ISM_India
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This very piece has been very cleverly written
Nice story to read,Loved the rhyming and alliteration
You should really consider adding an artwork to add appeal to this great poem
Thanks for posting!

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2012

reply by the author on 10-Jan-2012
    Thank you, Rahul, I really appreciate your thoughtful review. I would love to add illustration to my poems, but not sure how to go about it! Thank you again. xsx
Comment from Chris Tee
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Absolutely excellent and very publishable as kiddies poems perhaps just a touch shorter as the kids do loose their concentration sooner than us.
Well done with this splendid work here ma'am.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2012

reply by the author on 10-Jan-2012
    Thank you, Chris! That is such an encouraging review, thank you so much. xsx
Comment from percival86jack
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Great ending! Children's books are always popular but it is also a very competitive market! I would say if you can find a good illustrator to hook up with, I'd give it a shot! Best of luck, Sandra! Hugs, Jack xxxxxxx

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2012

reply by the author on 10-Jan-2012
    Thank you so much, Jack, what a great review! I really appreciate it. xsx Sandra.
Comment from rchitwood
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Oh!My chicken pox and now all of them has it. This is very good and I believe you could get them published. They are very creative and has good imagination. You can get them illustrated on the site by editing them. At the top of the page there is a FanArt.com click on that and it will take you to the art photos. This is very good I would recommend this to others. Blessings Rita

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2012

reply by the author on 10-Jan-2012
    Thank you so much Rita! I have tried to get photos from, FanArt, but I think I am doing something wrong. Do I have to join and submit photos or illustrations? I am not that good at it. Thank you again for such a lovely review. xsx
reply by rchitwood on 10-Jan-2012
    you have to be a member of Fan Story to get to use the art. But as a member you can write your work then go to the top of the page and click on Fan art. Rita Rita
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2012
    Thank you Rita, I shall do that! Sandra x