Night Stalker
meet a thousand years old vampire15 total reviews
Comment from Spitfire
So, you want me to feel sorry for this creature of the night who kills for food, not sport and only picks scum or the homeless for his victims? Not gonna happen. Great format and color that reinforce the vampire's descent into the bowels and underbelly of the city.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2012
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So, you want me to feel sorry for this creature of the night who kills for food, not sport and only picks scum or the homeless for his victims? Not gonna happen. Great format and color that reinforce the vampire's descent into the bowels and underbelly of the city.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2012
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ah, you goyya give this one a little credit and his work in population control. lol thx for your reading and review of this poem
Comment from litroc1700
a little choppy, but a nice dark twist sappy romatic twilight crap good job on giving a new light to the modern day vision on vampires
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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2012
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a little choppy, but a nice dark twist sappy romatic twilight crap good job on giving a new light to the modern day vision on vampires
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Comment Written 07-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2012
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thx for your review,,,,,jim
Comment from bellemarie
Nice artwork and black background is appropriate. Should "kills" be singular: "my kind who kill" Spelling: existance should be existence. Is Tristan a good vampire name? I would pick something more sinister.
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Nice artwork and black background is appropriate. Should "kills" be singular: "my kind who kill" Spelling: existance should be existence. Is Tristan a good vampire name? I would pick something more sinister.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2012
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i got stuck with names so i used my 2nd oldest grandson
s name. i know, i know, how could i? thx for your generous comments and review,,,,,jim
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Your welcome.
Comment from rchitwood
Yes this is most likely what a vampire is thinking. Though
Vampires aren't suppose to age I guess they could get tired.
Very creative imagination you have here and also a pleasant read. Your photo compliments your poem well. Blessings Rita
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Yes this is most likely what a vampire is thinking. Though
Vampires aren't suppose to age I guess they could get tired.
Very creative imagination you have here and also a pleasant read. Your photo compliments your poem well. Blessings Rita
Comment Written 07-Jan-2012
Comment from Denise S
You ended this nicely I think. What goes around comes around. Your poem was nicely done. You wrote it with just the right words. Good job
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You ended this nicely I think. What goes around comes around. Your poem was nicely done. You wrote it with just the right words. Good job
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Comment Written 07-Jan-2012
