Comment from curious67

Excellent

Very Cute! Dining in style with "soothing notes in their heads." This was a very fun read. Great job on the imagery in your words. I enjoyed this very much. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2012

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from gloriaj72

Excellent

What a delightful image this conjures up! It makes me wonder; would penguins really would enjoy classical music, or is this just a bit of whimsy? In either case, it makes for a lovely read!

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2012

I wonder too, if the penguins would enjoy the symphony. Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Joy Graham

Good

I really liked the snack the penguins had at the symphony. The reference to the tuxes was bang on. I wonder if they could have listened to instruments that bring visions of sea life to mind. Perhaps they could have listened to sea themed music also. How would the penguins applaud? This poem brings to my mind a video I once watched where penguins watched a light beam and their heads all moved together like at a tennis match when we watch the ball being passed back and forth. I like what you have done with this poem.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2012

Thanks for reading and reviewing. Elaine

Comment from gazzagodbod

Exceptional

yeahhh love penguins and wow this is great work mer my friend loved it thank you so much for sharing my friend gazzagodbodxxxx

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2012

I am honored by your review and six stars. Thanks so much. Elaine

Comment from ScarletClearwater

Excellent

I thought the part about them already being in tuxedos was really cute. They are intelligent birds, no? Great read. Nice imagery and great pic to use.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2012

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from rightforyou

Excellent

I think that you did a fine job bringing words to this wonderful photo . I love penguins and enjoyed reading your poem .Great job...Ron

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2012

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from TammyGail

Excellent

Your poem had such a whimsical feel to it. Great work on this it was creative and fun, witty and well written. Perfect imagery used alongside your poem. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2012

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

About time I checked you out, my faithful reviewer. I see this as a spoof about the rich fat men in tuxedos at a fancy affair, be it a symphony or cocktail party. The aquarium could be the "glass" mansions where they reside. That's my take on this imagery laden poem.

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2012

I like your interpretation. Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello mermaids I love your very eloquent (sp)t way how you told us about the night of classical music with your cute penguins
It was fun to read.

Gert

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2012

Thanks,Gert. Elaine

reply by Gert sherwood on 03-Jan-2012

You are welcome

Gert

Comment from artemis53

Excellent

Lovely. I hadn't thought of them in that way. It gives an insight not unlike a child's imagination of possibilities. Thank you for writing this.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2012

Glad you enjoyed this unusual poem. Elaine