Lonely Hearts Meet
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Comment from Maureen's Pen
A nice rounded chapter as Anna tries to have what I guess most would call normal feelings and reactions to everyday life with either spills or cuts etc.
Her inner balance is all off on that part of life and I think you did a great job showcasing that to the reader.
Very well done.
Thanks for sharing.
All my best.
Maureen
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2012
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A nice rounded chapter as Anna tries to have what I guess most would call normal feelings and reactions to everyday life with either spills or cuts etc.
Her inner balance is all off on that part of life and I think you did a great job showcasing that to the reader.
Very well done.
Thanks for sharing.
All my best.
Maureen
Comment Written 01-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and your support.
Comment from Writingfundimension
I got a special kick out of the picture of the little one playing with a box. Just saw a great YouTube of a baby sitting on a couch and laughing while his parent tears up sheets of paper. If you can find it, barbara (from yesterday's MSN offerings) I think you'd really enjoy it. Troy has been chivalrous and kind, but it appears that he's ready to maybe move the relationship up a notch. It's very realistic, though, that Anna would not be quite there yet. Great chapter. Take care, Bev
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2012
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I got a special kick out of the picture of the little one playing with a box. Just saw a great YouTube of a baby sitting on a couch and laughing while his parent tears up sheets of paper. If you can find it, barbara (from yesterday's MSN offerings) I think you'd really enjoy it. Troy has been chivalrous and kind, but it appears that he's ready to maybe move the relationship up a notch. It's very realistic, though, that Anna would not be quite there yet. Great chapter. Take care, Bev
Comment Written 01-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review. Anna needs to put herself back together before she can have a relationship with Troy.
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You're welcome, barbara!
Comment from The Stranger
well I dont know whether the timing of Michaels first step was pre-determined or just happened by sheer coincidence, but what a sweet way to begin a new year!
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2012
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well I dont know whether the timing of Michaels first step was pre-determined or just happened by sheer coincidence, but what a sweet way to begin a new year!
Comment Written 01-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2012
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I am sure it was a sheer coincidence. Babies never do anything when you want them too. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Deejharrington
Its so sad how Anna is still suffering from the affects of that monster's abuse. She still expects to be punished for mistakes that are not her fault.The best medicine is Troy and his parents. Maybe Troy will get his time without interruptions sooner or later.
deb
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2012
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Its so sad how Anna is still suffering from the affects of that monster's abuse. She still expects to be punished for mistakes that are not her fault.The best medicine is Troy and his parents. Maybe Troy will get his time without interruptions sooner or later.
deb
Comment Written 01-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2012
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I hope Anna and Troy do get to spend time together and soon.
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Comment from purrfect tale
Poor Troy! He's never going to get a chance to make his move. The grape juice story was a great addition to show Anna she's worrying about nothing.
Notes:
be thankful everybody involved i(s) all right
After she picked () it up,
Oh dear, I'd almost forgot(ten) about it.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2012
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Poor Troy! He's never going to get a chance to make his move. The grape juice story was a great addition to show Anna she's worrying about nothing.
Notes:
be thankful everybody involved i(s) all right
After she picked () it up,
Oh dear, I'd almost forgot(ten) about it.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2012
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Thank you for your eagle eye. I have made the corrections.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
a lovely chapter, full
of family love and homeliness...
such a pleasure to read, my friend.
When Troy and Anna walked into the Sorenson house, Paul sat in the recliner- think this needs to be...
into the Sorenson house, Paul was sitting in the recliner
or Paul sat down in the recliner to watch Michael
Happpppppppppppppy New Year.
Margaret
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2012
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a lovely chapter, full
of family love and homeliness...
such a pleasure to read, my friend.
When Troy and Anna walked into the Sorenson house, Paul sat in the recliner- think this needs to be...
into the Sorenson house, Paul was sitting in the recliner
or Paul sat down in the recliner to watch Michael
Happpppppppppppppy New Year.
Margaret
Comment Written 01-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2012
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I will recheck that area. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Barbara,
I love this chapter and the conversations are so real to me. Poor Anna taking the blame she had no control over. I hope she gets her self esteem back and with Troy's help I think she might. Well done....blessings, chey
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2012
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Hi Barbara,
I love this chapter and the conversations are so real to me. Poor Anna taking the blame she had no control over. I hope she gets her self esteem back and with Troy's help I think she might. Well done....blessings, chey
Comment Written 01-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gungalo
She is displaying guilt she felt when Michael first got hurt. It is something mothers do if allowed to. Meanwhile he is trying to dispel any guilt on her part. I think there is more coming between these two.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2012
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She is displaying guilt she felt when Michael first got hurt. It is something mothers do if allowed to. Meanwhile he is trying to dispel any guilt on her part. I think there is more coming between these two.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2012
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Thank you for your kind review. This is a romance novel and I haven't gotten to the romance, yet.
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Oh good, means I haven't missed anything important. LOL.
Comment from Paradox Tremors
Wonderfully written my friend. Anna just wants to keep kicking herself---I know, mothers are always like that (mine too). Enjoyed it. Hope you have a happy, safe, and wonderful new year my friend.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2012
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Wonderfully written my friend. Anna just wants to keep kicking herself---I know, mothers are always like that (mine too). Enjoyed it. Hope you have a happy, safe, and wonderful new year my friend.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2012
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Thank you for your kind review and Happy New Year.
Comment from judiverse
This is wonderful writing, barbara. Anna is still so down on herself, but she's working on her self-esteem issues. Troy is steady and dependable--just what she needs. Quip about wanting blue bandages helps relieve the tension. Michael is so cute! Loved the Indian blanket artwork. You want the dessert spelling for the brownie dessert. Hope yours is a lovely New Year's Day. judi
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2012
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This is wonderful writing, barbara. Anna is still so down on herself, but she's working on her self-esteem issues. Troy is steady and dependable--just what she needs. Quip about wanting blue bandages helps relieve the tension. Michael is so cute! Loved the Indian blanket artwork. You want the dessert spelling for the brownie dessert. Hope yours is a lovely New Year's Day. judi
Comment Written 01-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2012
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I will correct that. I always get those two mixed up. Thank you for your kind review.
