A Motherless Child
growing up without a mother47 total reviews
Comment from TheLadyHoll
What caught me was the ringing truth of the fact in those times, and still today, it is thought by society that someone's age determines the 'rightness' of their feelings. As though right and wrong has everything to do with age, and nothing to do actually being right or wrong. Which, of course, is wrong! :) Cheers, Holly
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What caught me was the ringing truth of the fact in those times, and still today, it is thought by society that someone's age determines the 'rightness' of their feelings. As though right and wrong has everything to do with age, and nothing to do actually being right or wrong. Which, of course, is wrong! :) Cheers, Holly
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Comment Written 29-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2011
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Charlene0513
To Writingfundimension,
A very sombre story that captures the essence of motherhood and their limitless and unconditional love that they aspire to give.
There will be a time to mourn and a time to celebrate her life as a testimony of who she was to you and all she was in the eyes of others; but mostly to our Heavenly Father.
Charlene
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2011
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To Writingfundimension,
A very sombre story that captures the essence of motherhood and their limitless and unconditional love that they aspire to give.
There will be a time to mourn and a time to celebrate her life as a testimony of who she was to you and all she was in the eyes of others; but mostly to our Heavenly Father.
Charlene
Comment Written 29-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2011
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Thank you so much for your supportive and encouraging review, Charlene. I do believe in life after death and I hope to see my mother again. Perhaps all will be made clear then. Blessings, Bev
Comment from Eleanor Buron
Your story touched me. It is well written and you related the events and surrounding circumstances beautifully. Nothing is over written which proves that the more simply things are revealed, the more emotion they can stir. I and my sister were separated from parents at a young age . We were in an orphanage and then a foster home. I had just turned 14 when my foster mother (who wasn't very nice) died.
My sister and I had no benefit of counseling and no ear to listen to anything we had to say. We are survivors and cherish every "good" experience and "good person" we encountered. They were substitute family and most never knew! ;) I felt the loss of your beloved mother as I feel the loss of my own (real) mother. Thank you for sharing.
Only saw one typo: There's a single quotation mark before 'spanking and none after the word. You have a talent for sharing a memoir in just the right way and with just the right words and progression of thought.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2011
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Your story touched me. It is well written and you related the events and surrounding circumstances beautifully. Nothing is over written which proves that the more simply things are revealed, the more emotion they can stir. I and my sister were separated from parents at a young age . We were in an orphanage and then a foster home. I had just turned 14 when my foster mother (who wasn't very nice) died.
My sister and I had no benefit of counseling and no ear to listen to anything we had to say. We are survivors and cherish every "good" experience and "good person" we encountered. They were substitute family and most never knew! ;) I felt the loss of your beloved mother as I feel the loss of my own (real) mother. Thank you for sharing.
Only saw one typo: There's a single quotation mark before 'spanking and none after the word. You have a talent for sharing a memoir in just the right way and with just the right words and progression of thought.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2011
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I really appreciate your beautiful and supportive review, Eleanor. It's sad that we understand each other through our mutual loss. And I am truly sorry to hear of how much you suffered after your separation from your family. Thank you so much for sharing your life with me - I find your words inspiring and comforting. It's so helpful to get such specific references to what works for the reader as you have so generously supplied here. Blessings, Bev
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Guess you awakened something in me. LOL My review is all about my story! Sorry about that. I think you are an excellent writer. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
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Oh, I didn't feel that at all, Eleanor. You were very sensitive and encouraging with your review. I felt your words were a real gift! Blessings, Bev
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Thank you. Blessings in return. Elly
Comment from mumsyone
Beautifully written! Except for two little typos, I wouldn't change word of it. It isn't easy to lose a mother at any age, but to lose one at such a young age is a tragedy. I pray that you will find peace in your heart, knowing that you will see your mother again one day. Hugs...
stunned by the wisdom I found in her books and had instinctually (instinctively) hoped for many decades
And I felt that I had betrayed her by not doing everything I could to hold unto (onto) her.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2011
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Beautifully written! Except for two little typos, I wouldn't change word of it. It isn't easy to lose a mother at any age, but to lose one at such a young age is a tragedy. I pray that you will find peace in your heart, knowing that you will see your mother again one day. Hugs...
stunned by the wisdom I found in her books and had instinctually (instinctively) hoped for many decades
And I felt that I had betrayed her by not doing everything I could to hold unto (onto) her.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2011
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Thank you, mumsyone, for your wonderful review. Your words are comforting and kind! Thanks also for catching the SPAGs. Blessings, Bev
Comment from winlaw writer
I like this story for its strong feelings and straight from the heart emotions that are represented well throughout this story that is just the right length to keep the reader interested and well informed of your trials that you are going through
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2011
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I like this story for its strong feelings and straight from the heart emotions that are represented well throughout this story that is just the right length to keep the reader interested and well informed of your trials that you are going through
Comment Written 29-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2011
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Thank you so much, winlaw writer. I appreciate your supportive words and awesome review. Warm regards, Bev
Comment from AprilShower
I am sorry you lost your mother at such a young age. I don't think anyone ever stops missing them. Our parents were a big part of our lives. Thank you for sharing this with us. I believe we will all meet again in a everlasting life.
April
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2011
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I am sorry you lost your mother at such a young age. I don't think anyone ever stops missing them. Our parents were a big part of our lives. Thank you for sharing this with us. I believe we will all meet again in a everlasting life.
April
Comment Written 29-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2011
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Thank you so much, April. Your kind words and supportive review are very much appreciated! Warm regards, Bev
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You're welcome, Bev. Warm regards to you, too.
Comment from c_lucas
Physiological ideas does not reach the heart of the burden one. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an sensitive read.
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Physiological ideas does not reach the heart of the burden one. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an sensitive read.
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Comment Written 29-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2011
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Thank you so much, charlie. I appreciate your review and supportive words! Warm regards, Bev
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You're welcome, Bev. I like your crisp style of writing.
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Thank you, charlie. I'm honored!
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You're welcome, Bev. Charlie
