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Easily Upset? Just Relax!

upset at something?

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Comment from October21
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This is a good poem to calm someone down... to tell them not to worry about other people's comments, and just to relax! Great job on this one. Could use a picture of a man getting really angry and then calming down :)

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2011


reply by the author on 25-Dec-2011
    Thanks! ;D!
Comment from stanzasandstuff
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a great concept for a 5/7/5...unfortunately the syllable count is not correct
Don't wor-ry- a-bout-oth-ers=7
if-your-a-per-son-of-heart-less-8

Also, am not sure what the 2nd line means.
Am happy to review again.

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2011


reply by the author on 25-Dec-2011
    Well, thanks! ;D!