Performance Problems- My Life! LOL
Viewing comments for Chapter 78 "The Grandest of Adventures!"A halarious adventure with misery, but always joy!
6 total reviews
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Mike,
I have to admit this story is a little long for my tastes, especially now when I have little time to review. You did a good job in writing this, it is detailed and interesting. I have heard of a couple of people of people who met on a poetry site and ended up married. However, you never know a person until you live with them 24/7 and they usually end in disappointment. Well done, chey
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2011
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Hi Mike,
I have to admit this story is a little long for my tastes, especially now when I have little time to review. You did a good job in writing this, it is detailed and interesting. I have heard of a couple of people of people who met on a poetry site and ended up married. However, you never know a person until you live with them 24/7 and they usually end in disappointment. Well done, chey
Comment Written 23-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2011
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With me you don't have to worry about reviewing and I always recomend that you fit it in, in a manner that is best for you. Before I started this book, I understood the reality of posting this type of work here. I enjoy what you say and it is so true, you never know a person until you jump across the casasm. In fact this part of my life is a bit of a saga, but had some wonderful effects for me. I thank you for the compliment and this review. Mike
Comment from Jean Lutz
Scenes from your life put into words. While reading I started thinking maybe I am spending too much time on this computer. Then I thought about the madness that waits outside and decided to just go on reviewing. Every now and then I will find the time to write and post something hoping for a soul connection.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2011
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Scenes from your life put into words. While reading I started thinking maybe I am spending too much time on this computer. Then I thought about the madness that waits outside and decided to just go on reviewing. Every now and then I will find the time to write and post something hoping for a soul connection.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2011
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You got me! This Christmas season I am thanking God for Cajun Cooker products as I am working on making cheese next year for next Christmas presents ... For lack of this years and the economy of the products Cajuns enjoy makes it a value as I decided on 10 pound cheese rounds. Another five pounds would double the cost because we hit the restaurant service sector. Cajuns know what is best in my mind!
With regards to both the internet and computer time, I always advise it is best to search your soul. In the third chapter after this, things go horrible wrong and really hurt me, yet with a little soul searching on figures out what is right for them. I deal with so many poets locally that have a set opinion of what it is to be sucessful, mainly involving publishing and local fandom. But if you told me three years ago you told me I would have a world wide audiecne, I not only would have laughed at you, but spit in your face as well. But that is exactly what happened to me as there is always a person in this world that shows you what you say and do is truly valued.
In Baltimore, I fear that Cajun is not a word that is thought about very much, but I love to watch the shows that are available that indicates that I have that very spirit to survive in life as well, contribute to it.
I know about every poet has written to the clice'd theme of rivers, but life is a swamp and once you understand its going's on and threats, as well your realistic place in it, you find the things of value that contribute to the enjoyment of life!
Ironically it is that vast audience on the internet that has allowed me to find and enjoy they wonderful things that exist in my own life and environs, even if it is fleeting in nature.
I enjoyed this review and God bless you for it! With love and Christmas greetings, Mike. Good souls are always connected, even if the person doesn't realize it.
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There is a local poetry contest I think you should enter since you are familiar with Cajun themes. I think the deadline is December 31. The link is posted on my Profile page.
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I am headed off to work again, but will definitely remember to take a look.
Comment from irishauthorme
This is a good illustration and account of what happens to many of the 'writing-site romances that get generated by the prose, poetry or fiction that people write and post. The actual person may be quiet different than the mental picture that was formed by their posted works. In any case, I think that very few work out. Mostly it's all egos and echoes, and both are equally deceptive.
Good work mike!
irish
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2011
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This is a good illustration and account of what happens to many of the 'writing-site romances that get generated by the prose, poetry or fiction that people write and post. The actual person may be quiet different than the mental picture that was formed by their posted works. In any case, I think that very few work out. Mostly it's all egos and echoes, and both are equally deceptive.
Good work mike!
irish
Comment Written 22-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2011
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Romance was one thing, but what I was hoping would come through is a desire for a more practical and sincere relationship, but honesty and disclosure would have been much better. I thank you for the compliments and this review. Mike
Comment from Jade Johnson
you have a very natural way of expressing yourself Mike, I found it very interesting. I started to write down some mistakes, but I will give you a couple of examples
The way they interacted with
not......... they way the interacted with,
your only mad at me not..... made at me
the type that anyone can sign on to not..... but they type that anyone can sign on to.
you have had quite a journey and can relate to some of it
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2011
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you have a very natural way of expressing yourself Mike, I found it very interesting. I started to write down some mistakes, but I will give you a couple of examples
The way they interacted with
not......... they way the interacted with,
your only mad at me not..... made at me
the type that anyone can sign on to not..... but they type that anyone can sign on to.
you have had quite a journey and can relate to some of it
Comment Written 22-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2011
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I spent hours correcting mistakes and I always know many will still slip past me. I thank you for your compliments, corrections and this review. I work a split double in addition to writing and need a couple hours of rest. Rest assured that I will work on the corrections tomorrow. Mike
Comment from The Stranger
well to come so late into a story rather puts me at a disadvantage, however this chapter was mosr enjoyable and very well presented for the reader.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2011
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well to come so late into a story rather puts me at a disadvantage, however this chapter was mosr enjoyable and very well presented for the reader.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2011
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No one has stuck with this work in it's entirety, and for the most part I really didn't expect that, though it would be pleasant to get a final overall opinion. Still, each chapter review tells me a lot so I thank you for taking the time to read this, the review and the compliments.
In a way, I am glad you didn't because I had to insert to chapters as I jumped ahead, then had posting problems here. Figured the fix. Mike
Comment from writingwithapencil
Despite a few minor spelling mistakes and grammatical errors where you missed out the subject 'I' this is very well written. Everyone should be able to write a story that expresses how they feel without having to worry that it will offend. It happens, we move on. To give you bad ratings is quite childish because this site is supposed to be about the work. Good job though.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2011
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Despite a few minor spelling mistakes and grammatical errors where you missed out the subject 'I' this is very well written. Everyone should be able to write a story that expresses how they feel without having to worry that it will offend. It happens, we move on. To give you bad ratings is quite childish because this site is supposed to be about the work. Good job though.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2011
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I thank you for your compliments and this review. Mike
