Sunset really a ray of hope.
After every sunset comes a new sunrise.2 total reviews
Comment from ernesto escarro
Sunset really a ray of hope.
Why there is an active sun during sunrise?
Because when life is seen with disappointment
in the weakened say at sunlight,
there is always a hope for when the morning
comes.
The sun is sustaining energy with courage to go on.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2011
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Sunset really a ray of hope.
Why there is an active sun during sunrise?
Because when life is seen with disappointment
in the weakened say at sunlight,
there is always a hope for when the morning
comes.
The sun is sustaining energy with courage to go on.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2011
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Thanks for your comments.
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You are welcome. God bless.
Comment from pnkglo
The artwork is beautiful and goes well with the idea of your writing. But you have not written a 5-7-5 poem. A 5-7-5 poem is called a Haiku that looks like this:
Line 1. Five syllables
Line 2. Seven syllables
Line 3. Five syllables
You have the makings of a beautiful 5-7-5 poem. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2011
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The artwork is beautiful and goes well with the idea of your writing. But you have not written a 5-7-5 poem. A 5-7-5 poem is called a Haiku that looks like this:
Line 1. Five syllables
Line 2. Seven syllables
Line 3. Five syllables
You have the makings of a beautiful 5-7-5 poem. Best wishes.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2011
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Yes.Thanks for your valuable comments.I will surely make up then.
