Kick It Like Stupid
Soccer- A World Known Sport9 total reviews
Comment from Modee
Very cool entry into the competition and the picture adds so much to the poem. Very nice entry. Good luck in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2011
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Very cool entry into the competition and the picture adds so much to the poem. Very nice entry. Good luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 19-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2011
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THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR TIME ON MY WORK
Comment from Glasstruth
Excellent picture, as the poem is a cheerleader for youth soccer, and about believing in yourself. The first line is a warning, if you don't have a vested interest stay away. As they say, "To be kind, you must be cruel." I don't know, just thought I'd have you think about it. Les
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2011
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Excellent picture, as the poem is a cheerleader for youth soccer, and about believing in yourself. The first line is a warning, if you don't have a vested interest stay away. As they say, "To be kind, you must be cruel." I don't know, just thought I'd have you think about it. Les
Comment Written 19-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2011
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THANK YOU FOR THE BRIGHT INSIGHTS
Comment from Piggies Grandma
I enjoyed reading your poem very much Anarka. It is cleverly written and very well thought out. With the picture it adds so much to the whole thing.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2011
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I enjoyed reading your poem very much Anarka. It is cleverly written and very well thought out. With the picture it adds so much to the whole thing.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2011
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Thank you for your very kind words- I really appreciate your insights
Comment from rchitwood
Your poem is very good and I enjoyed reading it,your description of soccer is very vivid and in just a few lines told us what can happen in a game. Very believable and your photo compliments your poem well.Blessings Rita
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2011
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Your poem is very good and I enjoyed reading it,your description of soccer is very vivid and in just a few lines told us what can happen in a game. Very believable and your photo compliments your poem well.Blessings Rita
Comment Written 15-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2011
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thank you for your time on my work and for your encouraging review of it.
Comment from keyym
So true.Unless you are sure of hitting it fine why bother at all.I like how short and terse it is.I feel i am learning how to spice my work.Yours is a job well done.Excellent
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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So true.Unless you are sure of hitting it fine why bother at all.I like how short and terse it is.I feel i am learning how to spice my work.Yours is a job well done.Excellent
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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thank you so so much for your very kind insights
Comment from Earl of Oxford
Blimey, those 3 in the picture are sure getting stuck in - I wouldn't fancy playing against them and I was only a goalie. :-)
Sometimes the spectators - especially parents of these little blighters, are more 'shrill' than the kids.
Best wishes, earl
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Blimey, those 3 in the picture are sure getting stuck in - I wouldn't fancy playing against them and I was only a goalie. :-)
Sometimes the spectators - especially parents of these little blighters, are more 'shrill' than the kids.
Best wishes, earl
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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thanks a lot, and oh yes I agree with you about the parents, my mom is one of them.
Comment from ScarletClearwater
Oh my goodness. That picture made me laugh til I almost hurled. It was perfect for your piece. Great job with such a light subject. It was great in so few words.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Oh my goodness. That picture made me laugh til I almost hurled. It was perfect for your piece. Great job with such a light subject. It was great in so few words.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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thank you for your very nice AND kind word.
Comment from Alexander E Poet
Lol great picture,This is very powerful piece , you have capture the truth and the reality of poetry that one can learn and feel. very well done. There were no errors. No typos and nothing
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Lol great picture,This is very powerful piece , you have capture the truth and the reality of poetry that one can learn and feel. very well done. There were no errors. No typos and nothing
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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thank you for looking through it with such diligence.
Comment from c_lucas
Soccer is a no contact sport, but players still get kicked, hit and elbowed. This short poem is within the criteria of the 5-7-5 rules. It is very well written.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Soccer is a no contact sport, but players still get kicked, hit and elbowed. This short poem is within the criteria of the 5-7-5 rules. It is very well written.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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thank you for your very kind and bright insights.
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You're welcome.
