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A Harry Potter fanfiction!
3 total reviews
Comment from
susand3022
I don't know... I think he would have screwed things up if he'd tried to shove his tongue down her throat! I liked this first kiss a lot! It was just perfect!!! :)
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
hahaha yeah I think he made the right move, though it was a classic, impulsive, James Potter move lol
Comment from
CHarte
This was quite enjoyable. I enjoy reading fanfiction. It brings loved characters into a new light. I will be trying to follow along with this.
Well done!
Collette
Comment Written 13-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2012
Comment from
oNray
Another nice fun read that keeps a reader jumping as your creative mind leads this group in and out of trouble. Nice job writing
Comment Written 12-Dec-2011
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