Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 44 "part 1 Chapter 14"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from Deejharrington
I know it takes many years not to jump at the sound or sight of your abuser's car or be startled when the phone rings late at night. You have captured that feeling perfectly.
You left us with a real cliff hanger! I sure hope Troy reaches Michael in time.
deb
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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I know it takes many years not to jump at the sound or sight of your abuser's car or be startled when the phone rings late at night. You have captured that feeling perfectly.
You left us with a real cliff hanger! I sure hope Troy reaches Michael in time.
deb
Comment Written 13-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
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you're welcome
deb
Comment from Carolyn Hilliard
A great place to end part 1 of this chapter. You did a nice job of creating the suspense that something was going to go wrong. Glad to see this was well liked - gave you the max of stars I was allowed.
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A great place to end part 1 of this chapter. You did a nice job of creating the suspense that something was going to go wrong. Glad to see this was well liked - gave you the max of stars I was allowed.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from eliz100
This was a good read from beginning to end. The ending hook is very powerful. I, the reader, want to keep reading. I look forward to the next chapter.
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This was a good read from beginning to end. The ending hook is very powerful. I, the reader, want to keep reading. I look forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from rheabug
Very well written chapter for this ongoing book. I really like the way you have described all of the elements of abuse and the problems surrounding abusive situations. Have a good day! Linda
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Very well written chapter for this ongoing book. I really like the way you have described all of the elements of abuse and the problems surrounding abusive situations. Have a good day! Linda
Comment Written 13-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mara del Mar
Holy God, Barbara! Always me have with the nerves de tip! But I for me, better a dog that not Bobby, I is more dangerous that a animal. You got me in embers with this novel.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Holy God, Barbara! Always me have with the nerves de tip! But I for me, better a dog that not Bobby, I is more dangerous that a animal. You got me in embers with this novel.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from N.K. Wagner
And Troy gets to be a hero! Anna takes a guilt trip. Does the ex-mother-in-law's PI get a photo of the whole thing to spin in a custody battle? So many questions! :D Nancy
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And Troy gets to be a hero! Anna takes a guilt trip. Does the ex-mother-in-law's PI get a photo of the whole thing to spin in a custody battle? So many questions! :D Nancy
Comment Written 13-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from kiwisteveh
I guess it's he nature of the beast that the reader is constantly waiting for the next complication to arise - it's like the old melodrama where the audience is shouting, 'He's behind you!' except here the reader is shouting, 'Don't put the baby down!'
I'm not sure this is as good as other 'chapters' but I can't quite put my finger on the reason. The time sequence doesn't quite seem to gel - she's at work, seems like it's mid-week at the start, talking about 'lunch tomorrow', then suddenly it's Saturday morning and she's thinking about lunch next week...
The sentence starting, 'Anna stuggled...' needs checking.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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I guess it's he nature of the beast that the reader is constantly waiting for the next complication to arise - it's like the old melodrama where the audience is shouting, 'He's behind you!' except here the reader is shouting, 'Don't put the baby down!'
I'm not sure this is as good as other 'chapters' but I can't quite put my finger on the reason. The time sequence doesn't quite seem to gel - she's at work, seems like it's mid-week at the start, talking about 'lunch tomorrow', then suddenly it's Saturday morning and she's thinking about lunch next week...
The sentence starting, 'Anna stuggled...' needs checking.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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I will recheck and see if I can figure it out. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from peggles
Another well written chapter Barbara
Troy seems to be nice and appeares to be geniunely fond of Anna she need to find a sincer shoulder to lean on after what she's has gone through
I am so afraid for
Michael in danger from that dog
I am looking forward to seeing where you take me now
so many twists and turns keep me intrigued as to what is next
Very well done!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Another well written chapter Barbara
Troy seems to be nice and appeares to be geniunely fond of Anna she need to find a sincer shoulder to lean on after what she's has gone through
I am so afraid for
Michael in danger from that dog
I am looking forward to seeing where you take me now
so many twists and turns keep me intrigued as to what is next
Very well done!
Comment Written 13-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from judy corcoran
an enjoyable and easy read barbara
this seems to be an interesting book and i wish you luck with it
good descriptive
speech well done
narrative kept me reading
a finish that pulled me in
love judy
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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an enjoyable and easy read barbara
this seems to be an interesting book and i wish you luck with it
good descriptive
speech well done
narrative kept me reading
a finish that pulled me in
love judy
Comment Written 13-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
Wow! I was attacked by a dog when I was six years old, and never forget the experience. This is very well written chapter, that hold my interest from the very beginning.
Good job!!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Wow! I was attacked by a dog when I was six years old, and never forget the experience. This is very well written chapter, that hold my interest from the very beginning.
Good job!!
Comment Written 13-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
