Some Days
Quatrains15 total reviews
Comment from JW
This is an interesting poem. It makes the reader think about comparing the various colors to the main mood of the day. Today it is sunny, yet the trees are bare and it is cool.
Thus, I guess I have a rainbow. JW
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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This is an interesting poem. It makes the reader think about comparing the various colors to the main mood of the day. Today it is sunny, yet the trees are bare and it is cool.
Thus, I guess I have a rainbow. JW
Comment Written 13-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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We have only had gray all week-bad for depression. Thanks for reviewing~Debbie
Comment from deb552
I think you've come up with a new form of poetry, a rainbow poem. I like how you use different colors to describe the days. It give the read a positive tone. The couplet rhyming in each quatrain is well thought out, and gives the poem a comfortable rhythm. I like how in the 2nd to last quatrain, you take the color black and turn it around, to end with a brighter feel. The back ground color and artwork are good choices. xxx deb
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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I think you've come up with a new form of poetry, a rainbow poem. I like how you use different colors to describe the days. It give the read a positive tone. The couplet rhyming in each quatrain is well thought out, and gives the poem a comfortable rhythm. I like how in the 2nd to last quatrain, you take the color black and turn it around, to end with a brighter feel. The back ground color and artwork are good choices. xxx deb
Comment Written 12-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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Thanks so much Deb. I still feel lousy and am going to the doctor in the AM. Take care~Debbie
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Please let me know how things go at the doctor. I'm concerned about you my friend!
Comment from Bellringer
Debbie, You did a very good job in this colorful poem. You combined whimsical lines with more serious ones to deliver the message that "colors" always manage to come back to us if we don't panic and "wait a while." Truly a lesson in patience and hope. Blessings, Hector
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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Debbie, You did a very good job in this colorful poem. You combined whimsical lines with more serious ones to deliver the message that "colors" always manage to come back to us if we don't panic and "wait a while." Truly a lesson in patience and hope. Blessings, Hector
Comment Written 12-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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Thank you so much for your kind words and review. I have learned that with patience, things usually right themselves!!! Debbie
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You're very welcome, Debbie. Blessings, Hector
Comment from adewpearl
The rhyming couplets in your quatrains are strong
good use of alliterative groupings like some, smiley, sunny
What a wonderfully cheerful and colorful picture you paint
good alliteration in wedding white and many more
I like your hopeful closing and thoughtful message :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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The rhyming couplets in your quatrains are strong
good use of alliterative groupings like some, smiley, sunny
What a wonderfully cheerful and colorful picture you paint
good alliteration in wedding white and many more
I like your hopeful closing and thoughtful message :-) Brooke
Comment Written 11-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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Thank you so much for your kind words and review!!! Debbie
Comment from Veronica Grace
Beautiful artwork and a lovely poem to match. I like the way you used the colors to describe the days and the words you used to paint a picture of your own. Good work
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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Beautiful artwork and a lovely poem to match. I like the way you used the colors to describe the days and the words you used to paint a picture of your own. Good work
Comment Written 11-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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Thank you so much for your kind words and review!!! Debbie
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Winter is basically white, although I think the winter color in TX is grey and brown. LOL I enjoyed reading your poem. The rhythm and rhyming scheme were very good.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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Winter is basically white, although I think the winter color in TX is grey and brown. LOL I enjoyed reading your poem. The rhythm and rhyming scheme were very good.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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Thank you so much for your kind words and review!!! Debbie
Comment from Gungalo
It seems to be a mood piece. You know, like it follows your mood for the day. Don't worry or give up, the mood will change tomorrow.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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It seems to be a mood piece. You know, like it follows your mood for the day. Don't worry or give up, the mood will change tomorrow.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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Thank you so much for your kind words and review!!! Debbie
Comment from Piggies Grandma
I enjoyed reading your very colourful poem Deb. It is cleverly written and very well thought out. The picture with the rainbow matches your words perfectly.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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I enjoyed reading your very colourful poem Deb. It is cleverly written and very well thought out. The picture with the rainbow matches your words perfectly.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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Thank you so much for your kind words and review!!! Debbie
Comment from stanzasandstuff
This is a very unique and creative poem, a rainbow poem, very nice. It is well written and can't see how it could be improved. Thank you for sharing and well done!
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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This is a very unique and creative poem, a rainbow poem, very nice. It is well written and can't see how it could be improved. Thank you for sharing and well done!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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Thank you so much for your kind words and review!!! Debbie
Comment from Cheryl In Minnesota
What a beautiful exploration of colors and how they can affect and motivate us, as well as what they represent. I like the specific examples which help me visualize the colors, such as the mushroom and wedding dress.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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What a beautiful exploration of colors and how they can affect and motivate us, as well as what they represent. I like the specific examples which help me visualize the colors, such as the mushroom and wedding dress.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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Thank you so much for your kind words and review!!! Debbie
