Comment from acajudy

Excellent

A lovely naani for the contest. You have stayed within the parameters of the contest and good luck in that. I enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing this work.

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2011

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2011

Thank you so much, acujudy for these nice comments.

Comment from journey30

Excellent

I like this...it has a soft, smooth ring to it. This is the kind of poetry I like, where it makes me want to visualize. The print made it even better. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2011

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2011

Thank you very much, this is cheerful and helpful toward my writing:):)

Comment from Modee

Excellent

Very nice and peaceful. I liked the whole feeling of the piece. The colors and the picture bring such nice emotions. Very cool. :)

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 Comment Written 08-Dec-2011

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2011

I really appreciate this very detailed review and such cheerful thoughts.

Comment from Enchanted Pen

Exceptional

I really liked this poem! You effectively utilized the poem type to convey your meaning, (I think it was formatted right, but I've never written a Naanii before. The length seemed perfect for the topic, though since dreams are so fleeting. Nice job!

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2011

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2011

Thank you very much, this is a rewarding review:):)

Comment from cathmine

Excellent

donna, you painted a beautiful image in my mind with the words of your naani poem. Many times have I looked up at such a pristine white cloud, then blinked, and yes, it was gone!
Cathmine

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2011

Thanks so much, Cathmine for this interesting reply. keep looking up:)