A Lesson From a Duck
A Christmas story11 total reviews
Comment from elliejean
I love the poem. I love the story. Henri gave you hope. If he could live through that ordeal, guess what us humans can do. The story of life during Christmas is a blessing. Great work.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2011
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I love the poem. I love the story. Henri gave you hope. If he could live through that ordeal, guess what us humans can do. The story of life during Christmas is a blessing. Great work.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2011
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I am so glad you liked my story. Thank you for reviewing it.
Comment from rchitwood
A very good story and also very touching as your duck was blessed that someone cared enough to take care and love him.Your story has good spirit the kind as you said makes the hope come alive.Very good dialogue and characters a pleasure to read.Blessings Rita
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2011
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A very good story and also very touching as your duck was blessed that someone cared enough to take care and love him.Your story has good spirit the kind as you said makes the hope come alive.Very good dialogue and characters a pleasure to read.Blessings Rita
Comment Written 16-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2011
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Thank you Rita. I am glad you liked my story.
Comment from Larrypic11
Very touching and heartwarming story. We could certainly use as mant Christmas miracles as we can get. Good luck in the contest. Larry
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2011
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Very touching and heartwarming story. We could certainly use as mant Christmas miracles as we can get. Good luck in the contest. Larry
Comment Written 16-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2011
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Thanks Larry for reviewing and commenting so kindly to my story.
Comment from N.K. Wagner
A lovely Christmas story. Henry the Miracle Duck! Love it. Merry Christmas to you and yours, and may you have a happy and prosperous New Year. :) Nancy
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2011
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A lovely Christmas story. Henry the Miracle Duck! Love it. Merry Christmas to you and yours, and may you have a happy and prosperous New Year. :) Nancy
Comment Written 16-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2011
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Thank you Nancy for your kind comments on my story. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you, too.
Comment from hollyinvesuvianite
Wow! Such an inspiring story, that brought tears to my eyes. I really can't find any weaknesses here- the story is well written, broken up for an easy read, and created such an atmosphere of hope and love. Great job, Holly
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2011
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Wow! Such an inspiring story, that brought tears to my eyes. I really can't find any weaknesses here- the story is well written, broken up for an easy read, and created such an atmosphere of hope and love. Great job, Holly
Comment Written 16-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2011
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Thank you Holly for reading and commenting so kindly on my story. I am glad you liked it.
Comment from G.B. Smith
The Christmas season is a season of hope. God sent his only son as a gift to us and because of that gift we do have hope. This hope is the hope of eternal life.
My wish for each of you is that this year your life will be filled with love and hope.
I loved your tender story of Henry and his Christmas miracle. It is heart warming and a wonderful contest entry. Best wishes
Bear
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2011
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The Christmas season is a season of hope. God sent his only son as a gift to us and because of that gift we do have hope. This hope is the hope of eternal life.
My wish for each of you is that this year your life will be filled with love and hope.
I loved your tender story of Henry and his Christmas miracle. It is heart warming and a wonderful contest entry. Best wishes
Bear
Comment Written 12-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2011
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Thank you Bear for your kind review of my Christmas story. I am glad you liked it.
Comment from peggles
I enjoyed reading it very much
It is cleverly written and
exceptionally well presented
I am so happy for the poor duck
he was a survivor
A good message of hope in this read
Well done
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2011
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I enjoyed reading it very much
It is cleverly written and
exceptionally well presented
I am so happy for the poor duck
he was a survivor
A good message of hope in this read
Well done
Comment Written 07-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2011
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Thanks for your kind review. I am glad you enjoyed my story.
Comment from kathryn85
A very sweet and tender story. It brought pain and despair and yet through it all little Henry came wounded and bruised much like Jesus when He was crucified but now he came as a helpless baby. A baby that was offering hope for all and a perfect peace on the beautiful Christmas morning. Through a busy, rushed and hectic time, little Henry made everyone pause and be thankful on this Christmas Day...a Day of miracles and after all, little Henry was truly a miracle.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2011
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A very sweet and tender story. It brought pain and despair and yet through it all little Henry came wounded and bruised much like Jesus when He was crucified but now he came as a helpless baby. A baby that was offering hope for all and a perfect peace on the beautiful Christmas morning. Through a busy, rushed and hectic time, little Henry made everyone pause and be thankful on this Christmas Day...a Day of miracles and after all, little Henry was truly a miracle.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2011
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Thank you so much for the great review. I especially loved your making a connection with Jesus and my story. Blessings to you.
Comment from Mara del Mar
"...as long as there is a heart beating and someone who cares."Oh... this was touch my heart! A story really exciting and touching. This makes I mourn. You have all reason in the words of up, ""...as long as there is a heart beating and someone who cares."
Congratulations and luck.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2011
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"...as long as there is a heart beating and someone who cares."Oh... this was touch my heart! A story really exciting and touching. This makes I mourn. You have all reason in the words of up, ""...as long as there is a heart beating and someone who cares."
Congratulations and luck.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2011
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Thank you for your kind review of my story. I am glad you liked it.
Comment from lekhani
Very well written story,it held my interest all the time. it is very touching story also. It shows the feelings and helplessness of the boy and his mother very well. The story has a happy ending . Great!
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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2011
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Very well written story,it held my interest all the time. it is very touching story also. It shows the feelings and helplessness of the boy and his mother very well. The story has a happy ending . Great!
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Comment Written 05-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2011
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I am so glad you enjoyed my story. Thank you for the great review.
