Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Embrace Integrity"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
102 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks a nice lesson to the young people how to live in values and to avoid negative influences of society and to act in love and honesty to make a real journey to embrace integrity; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Keep Writing, Inspiring, Changing
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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This speaks a nice lesson to the young people how to live in values and to avoid negative influences of society and to act in love and honesty to make a real journey to embrace integrity; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Keep Writing, Inspiring, Changing
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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I'm glad you caught the meaning of this poem and enjoyed it. Thank you for reviewing it.
Comment from royowen
It's really tough being young. One tends to walk to the beat of self's drum, some are over confident, some self's deprecation, but it's tough unless one knows they are unconditionally loved. Even brethren tend to think it's all about gifts, but gifts are for the edification of others...not self. Beautifully written in deep spiritual and philosophical reason. Integrity is always God's aim, otherwise it's hypocrisy. Beautifully written in rhyming aabb stanzas, well done, my friend blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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It's really tough being young. One tends to walk to the beat of self's drum, some are over confident, some self's deprecation, but it's tough unless one knows they are unconditionally loved. Even brethren tend to think it's all about gifts, but gifts are for the edification of others...not self. Beautifully written in deep spiritual and philosophical reason. Integrity is always God's aim, otherwise it's hypocrisy. Beautifully written in rhyming aabb stanzas, well done, my friend blessings, Roy
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much Roy for your beautiful review and Input. It is so true what you say and really encouraging.
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Well done
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem seems to describe the feelings of both earthly parents and the Heavenly one too. Well done. We all want too see our children grow up loving and giving and sure of themselves.
Keep writing.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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This poem seems to describe the feelings of both earthly parents and the Heavenly one too. Well done. We all want too see our children grow up loving and giving and sure of themselves.
Keep writing.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. It is a very good reaction and I appreciate it very much.
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You are most kindly welcome.
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Comment from C. Gale Burnett
There is everything to love about this poem, and it is very deserving of six stars.
Your overall presentation is beautiful. I like the purple background you choses, for purple is a spiritual color.
Without any artwork, your poem could easily stand alone.
What was most precious and meaningful to me was the message and wisdom conveyed through every well chosen word within your poem. I loved how you wrote from God's point of view. We are here to glorify Him, and you have certainly done so.
You obviously took care in constructing each verse and stanza. I enjoyed the rhyme.
Thank you so much for sharing this!
Blessings to you. I pray you are managing well.
Gale
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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There is everything to love about this poem, and it is very deserving of six stars.
Your overall presentation is beautiful. I like the purple background you choses, for purple is a spiritual color.
Without any artwork, your poem could easily stand alone.
What was most precious and meaningful to me was the message and wisdom conveyed through every well chosen word within your poem. I loved how you wrote from God's point of view. We are here to glorify Him, and you have certainly done so.
You obviously took care in constructing each verse and stanza. I enjoyed the rhyme.
Thank you so much for sharing this!
Blessings to you. I pray you are managing well.
Gale
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. It is very nice to know that there are people like you out there. Your review is very helpful to the point and it shows you really grasped the intent therein. Thank you for the 6 stars.
Comment from Patty Palmer
Good poem. well written. It carries some strong message of integrity and if they live that life it will be one to be proud of.
"Keep right on writing!"
Patty
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Good poem. well written. It carries some strong message of integrity and if they live that life it will be one to be proud of.
"Keep right on writing!"
Patty
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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This is a wonderful review and thanks for writing it and commenting on it as you did, a very good input. It is beautiful.
Comment from bronze415
This is definitely a beautiful poem of wisdom, truth, and instruction. Your words are very inspiring, and encouraging.The poetic flow of words run smoothly in each line and stanza. Beautiful writing! It held my interest, from beginning to end. Great job!
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2011
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This is definitely a beautiful poem of wisdom, truth, and instruction. Your words are very inspiring, and encouraging.The poetic flow of words run smoothly in each line and stanza. Beautiful writing! It held my interest, from beginning to end. Great job!
Comment Written 17-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2011
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Thank you so much for reviewing my poem in such a helpful way; I'm glad you liked it. Merry Chrismas.
Comment from The Stranger
Integrity, honesty and an indominable spirit are the three strongest characteristics a person could possess, this is an excellent poem my friend
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2011
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Integrity, honesty and an indominable spirit are the three strongest characteristics a person could possess, this is an excellent poem my friend
Comment Written 17-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2011
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Thank you Stranger. Your review means a lot to me and I'm so thankful for your good word on it. Merry Christmas, Your friend, Sarah
Comment from DALLAS01
I really like the subject matter. Not a value that is very often expressed, but one that is certainly relevant. The rhyme scheme is fluid and the utilization of strong verbs is effective throughout.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2011
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I really like the subject matter. Not a value that is very often expressed, but one that is certainly relevant. The rhyme scheme is fluid and the utilization of strong verbs is effective throughout.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2011
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Thank you so much for your review on my pome, and I'm glad your like its intent and words. Merry Christmas. Love Sarah
Comment from words
I appreciate your write on integrity.
It is a virtue that is not much touted in these troubled times.
I especially liked:Leave no trails of lies or deceit,
Putting your loved ones at risk of defeat.
Stand in the gap, your sword held high,
Uniting the army with your warriors' cry.
This is My plea to you, My youth:
Build on the foundation of love and truth.
Negative thoughts rebuke and fight.
Fill your life with Love's warm light.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2011
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I appreciate your write on integrity.
It is a virtue that is not much touted in these troubled times.
I especially liked:Leave no trails of lies or deceit,
Putting your loved ones at risk of defeat.
Stand in the gap, your sword held high,
Uniting the army with your warriors' cry.
This is My plea to you, My youth:
Build on the foundation of love and truth.
Negative thoughts rebuke and fight.
Fill your life with Love's warm light.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2011
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Thank you for your marvellous review to the specifics, I really appreciate it. Merry Christmas to you. Love, Sarah
Comment from NightWriter
"Embrace Integrity" is a perfectly written poem with captivating prose, perfect rhythm and rhyme throughout. Its message most important. There are too many negative influences out there for our youth. Well stated.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2011
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"Embrace Integrity" is a perfectly written poem with captivating prose, perfect rhythm and rhyme throughout. Its message most important. There are too many negative influences out there for our youth. Well stated.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2011
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Thank you for a great and to the point review, especially about the message. Merry Christmas to you. Sarah
