Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 42 "Part three Chapter 13"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from Mara del Mar
For me is wonderful, all time i follow this novel i have question if Ana and Troy would get to unite their lives in peace and love.For I see that if, because every time are closer. I loved, congrats.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2011
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For me is wonderful, all time i follow this novel i have question if Ana and Troy would get to unite their lives in peace and love.For I see that if, because every time are closer. I loved, congrats.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from RebelRose
I surely hope that sound was just Michael rolling over. Somehow, I don't think it was. Another good chapter. I look forward to the next.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2011
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I surely hope that sound was just Michael rolling over. Somehow, I don't think it was. Another good chapter. I look forward to the next.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Rama Rao
It's nice to hear you had a good thanksgiving weekend.
As for this post, although short it made good reading. You wrote about the noise of a loud muffler that caused Anna some discomfort. How is it relevant? Or have I missed something?
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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It's nice to hear you had a good thanksgiving weekend.
As for this post, although short it made good reading. You wrote about the noise of a loud muffler that caused Anna some discomfort. How is it relevant? Or have I missed something?
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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The loud muffler is very relevant or I would not put it in. Bobby had a loud muffler....I won't give it away. Thank you for the kind review,
Comment from Dave M
Barbara,
What? No big cliffhanger? No, "Look out! Bobby escaped from jail"? All the same, this is exceptional, character-based romance.
I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter and have one wordsmithing suggestion:
"Anna rubbed [held] her stomach." No nits here, but I usually take someone's rubbing their stomach as a sign of satisfaction or a full belly.
Dave
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Barbara,
What? No big cliffhanger? No, "Look out! Bobby escaped from jail"? All the same, this is exceptional, character-based romance.
I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter and have one wordsmithing suggestion:
"Anna rubbed [held] her stomach." No nits here, but I usually take someone's rubbing their stomach as a sign of satisfaction or a full belly.
Dave
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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I have made that correction. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Adri7enne
Good chapter, barb. Sometimes, just reading about an abused person participating in a normal activity and rejoicing in the freedom to do so is a thrill in itself. It must be such a horror to never feel safe in your own home. You remind me of that every time I read one of your chapters. Well done, girl.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Good chapter, barb. Sometimes, just reading about an abused person participating in a normal activity and rejoicing in the freedom to do so is a thrill in itself. It must be such a horror to never feel safe in your own home. You remind me of that every time I read one of your chapters. Well done, girl.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Deejharrington
Maybe not a cliff hanger, but the reader still feels a sense of danger. I guess like an victim of abuse, you never lose that fear of things going too well! The characters and story line continue to educate and entertain.
deb
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Maybe not a cliff hanger, but the reader still feels a sense of danger. I guess like an victim of abuse, you never lose that fear of things going too well! The characters and story line continue to educate and entertain.
deb
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
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you're welcome
deb
Comment from Belinda
Hi, Barbara, I found myself always on the watch while reading Anna's story...:) Fortunately nothing bad happens today. It's interesting to have a peek to the result of years of abuse to a woman.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Hi, Barbara, I found myself always on the watch while reading Anna's story...:) Fortunately nothing bad happens today. It's interesting to have a peek to the result of years of abuse to a woman.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Nanashirley
Another great chapter. I am so glad that you are adding personal feelings for everyone. I hope the sound was nothing. It is good bait.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Another great chapter. I am so glad that you are adding personal feelings for everyone. I hope the sound was nothing. It is good bait.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from mumsyone
Good chapter, Barbara. Always glad to catch up on Troy and Anna!
"I'll follow you to my parents (parents')."
"Look(,) your favorite story."
"See(,) no chains or bruises."
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Good chapter, Barbara. Always glad to catch up on Troy and Anna!
"I'll follow you to my parents (parents')."
"Look(,) your favorite story."
"See(,) no chains or bruises."
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and I will check those areas.
Comment from judiverse
Great chapter, barbara. Your characterization of Anna seems right-on. She still has fears about Bobby even though he's in prison. She shows great love for her son and it's natural that she would question whether he was better off without a father. She's also cautions about her relationship with Troy. Good dialogue. judi
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Great chapter, barbara. Your characterization of Anna seems right-on. She still has fears about Bobby even though he's in prison. She shows great love for her son and it's natural that she would question whether he was better off without a father. She's also cautions about her relationship with Troy. Good dialogue. judi
Comment Written 27-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
