Idiomatic Fanatic
More idioms than you can shake a stick at...59 total reviews
Comment from Cheryl Daphine
A great entry,you did superb. 39,wow. Each one was humorous and extremely well written. I loved it.Best wishes with your entry.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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A great entry,you did superb. 39,wow. Each one was humorous and extremely well written. I loved it.Best wishes with your entry.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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Thank you. I appreciate your kind words.
Steve
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Yes, I do dig this poem..
not only clever, but very
entertaining... must surely
be the winner, Steve.
Good luck to you, my friend.
Margaret
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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Yes, I do dig this poem..
not only clever, but very
entertaining... must surely
be the winner, Steve.
Good luck to you, my friend.
Margaret
Comment Written 26-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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Thank you, Margaret. I appreciate your kind words.
Steve
Comment from janalma
This is a wonderful poem and I am in awe of your idiom knowledge. I was chuckling all the way thru, not just at the humor, which was excellent, but at the ability you've shown at knocking it all together. Loved it. Very good.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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This is a wonderful poem and I am in awe of your idiom knowledge. I was chuckling all the way thru, not just at the humor, which was excellent, but at the ability you've shown at knocking it all together. Loved it. Very good.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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Thank you. I appreciate your kind words and the six stars.
Steve
Comment from RYME4U
Wow, I sure do dig it. You've done a marvelous job on this.You fit in all those proverbs and cliche's beautifully! The words make sense and the wittiness is great. Loved it. It's the cat;s meow
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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Wow, I sure do dig it. You've done a marvelous job on this.You fit in all those proverbs and cliche's beautifully! The words make sense and the wittiness is great. Loved it. It's the cat;s meow
Comment Written 26-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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See, I would say the cat's whiskers or maybe the cat's pajamas!
Thanks for the kind words.
Steve
Comment from cvcopac
Probably and you'll probably win this contest too. Good story without the idioms; all very recognizable. Enjoyable reading material. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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Probably and you'll probably win this contest too. Good story without the idioms; all very recognizable. Enjoyable reading material. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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Thank you. I appreciate your kind words.
Steve
Comment from bard owl
Yes, I do dig this poem. It is chock full of bits of wisdom I have heard all my life. Your rhythm and rhyme are perfectly executed and the mixed message quite clear. Best of luck in the contest. Blessings, Linda
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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Yes, I do dig this poem. It is chock full of bits of wisdom I have heard all my life. Your rhythm and rhyme are perfectly executed and the mixed message quite clear. Best of luck in the contest. Blessings, Linda
Comment Written 26-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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Thanks, Linda. Glad you enjoyed.
Steve
Comment from Earl of Oxford
Fun notes, Steve - yes, it is a longun (as the actress said to the bishop). :-)
ALL stanzas so clever and so funny - 'every one a winner'.
I genuinely smiled and giggled all the way through and in the end wanted more (unusual for me when reading longuns.
You've excelled the contest criteria by miles. and 'I take my hat off to you'.
Worth a sixer of 'anyone's money'.
This must win! 'Happy hunting'.
Earl
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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Fun notes, Steve - yes, it is a longun (as the actress said to the bishop). :-)
ALL stanzas so clever and so funny - 'every one a winner'.
I genuinely smiled and giggled all the way through and in the end wanted more (unusual for me when reading longuns.
You've excelled the contest criteria by miles. and 'I take my hat off to you'.
Worth a sixer of 'anyone's money'.
This must win! 'Happy hunting'.
Earl
Comment Written 26-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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Thank you - a sixer from the man who wrote all the works of Shakespeare is good enough for me.
Steve
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LOL, Steve.
Thoroughly deserved IMHO. Earl
Comment from wiljacro
HI! kiwisteveh,I must say that I really like your style, anyone who can make me laugh out loud through 12 verses of a poem is definitely O.K. by me, and, to top it off by inserting 39 idioms into the rhymes--FANTASTIC! To call all that "Well done!" just doesn't go far enough. Thank you for making, not only my day, but my week! wiljacro.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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HI! kiwisteveh,I must say that I really like your style, anyone who can make me laugh out loud through 12 verses of a poem is definitely O.K. by me, and, to top it off by inserting 39 idioms into the rhymes--FANTASTIC! To call all that "Well done!" just doesn't go far enough. Thank you for making, not only my day, but my week! wiljacro.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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High praise indeed - happy to make you smile - that's what it's all about - oh, and winning contests too, of course.
Steve
Comment from strandregs
You get my desert with a cherry.flowing flow and fleegel speegel.
My daughter just done homework on similies I'll copy this and
lend it to her teacher.( I won't say I wrote it like I did with the Daffodils).Zelick
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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You get my desert with a cherry.flowing flow and fleegel speegel.
My daughter just done homework on similies I'll copy this and
lend it to her teacher.( I won't say I wrote it like I did with the Daffodils).Zelick
Comment Written 26-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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Thanks, Z
At least this one is suitable for children - don't think I included anything even a tiny bit suggestive.
How old is your little girl?
Steve
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11 yrs
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all she does is moshi monsters - google it . those tiny monsters gobble up lots of hard earned cash.
you could write a pretty good/horrible- poem about all the ways clever companys suck money out of parents.
Zelick
Comment from Melspoems
Brilliant and very clever.
You merged all these idiom together so smoothly.
I love the ones that connect with each other. It's hard to pick a favourite because they are all so good.
The rhythm and rhymes are great throughout and I can offer no suggestions for improvement.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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Brilliant and very clever.
You merged all these idiom together so smoothly.
I love the ones that connect with each other. It's hard to pick a favourite because they are all so good.
The rhythm and rhymes are great throughout and I can offer no suggestions for improvement.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
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Thank you. I appreciate your kind words.
Steve
