close your eyes
a sweet escape of reality2 total reviews
Comment from S. Marie Vernon
close your eyes by penzynlinda is about the innocence of a baby closing its eyes, peaceful and without fear. Sometimes it is evidenced by a smile. An sweet little 5-7-5 poem. I believe the syllables are all OK and so is the poem. Enjoyed reading it. Thank you.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2011
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close your eyes by penzynlinda is about the innocence of a baby closing its eyes, peaceful and without fear. Sometimes it is evidenced by a smile. An sweet little 5-7-5 poem. I believe the syllables are all OK and so is the poem. Enjoyed reading it. Thank you.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the comment. I really appreciate it.
Comment from cmcjourney
Its amazing how such a small amount of words can give someone a huge message they have been waiting for. Thank you so much for sharing this poem. What a blessed message your poem has given me today. Thank you for giving me another stepping stone to move forward in this journey of life. Sincerely, cmcjourney
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2011
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Its amazing how such a small amount of words can give someone a huge message they have been waiting for. Thank you so much for sharing this poem. What a blessed message your poem has given me today. Thank you for giving me another stepping stone to move forward in this journey of life. Sincerely, cmcjourney
Comment Written 18-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the comment. I really appreciate it.
